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Deer, Girl, Winter, Friendship, Kid, Child, Sleeping

When Thoughts Cease

 
"when thoughts cease to flow ~ where does ego go " quote by _ Unseeking Seeker I am just a droplet bubble in time, unique selfdom and ego my life pride; born of snow in Canada's wintertime, in my soul snowflakes will always abide. Writing poems is my Ego's pastime, penning of confusion and illusion; figments of my imagination flow, fearing when my words will cease forever ! Have always had a connection with snow, my ego writes of love for the forest; when I cease- this is where my soul will go, for the forest was a place I cherished. I will be snowflakes that cascade and blow, my ego will dwell as a delusion; in summer I may be flowers that grow, my thoughts may cease but my spirit never ! I am honored with the ego of "I", often I am lost in contemplation; for I have been blessed to let my thoughts fly, accept that the end comes to creation. It may be old age or the day I die, but I will come in snowflake profusion, remember me not with sad grief and woe; see the I and me who will be ever ! ___________________ May 09, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/When Thoughts Cease Copyright Protected, ID 05-1454-605-09 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bubble of Illusion sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 05/20/2022 First Place
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Koplin Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 2:43 PM
Beautifully written Constance, congratulations on your win!!
La France Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 2:44 PM
Mark, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~ Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing write. Love the colorful picture. Have a great/blessed weekend................
La France Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 1:56 PM
Paula thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Logan Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 3:32 AM
Congrats on this well written gem, Constance. Sorry I missed it when you posted.
La France Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Jenna, thank you so much for the congrats and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 8:00 PM
Magical! Congrats on your win, Constance
La France Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 1:59 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the inspiration, contest and my wonderful placement and for the compliment and congrats blessings ~ Constance
Hankins Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 7:54 PM
Absolutely fantastic, Constance. I suppose I ought to withdraw my entry! (chuckling) This is beautiful.
La France Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and the chuckle, never, dear poet for your poetry is amazing, blessings ~Constance
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 6:23 PM
wow, BEST one I have seen yet on this topic, Dear Heart. Amazing pen.
La France Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 6:31 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, I means a lot to me, blessings dear friend ~Constance
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