When Things Lose

When nights becomes sleepless
When mind becomes thoughtless
When heart becomes emotionless

Nasty nights when fall,
With hardly anybody to call,
O god! Be stars shining
To shine my darkness

Mystery mind when find,
No one to be kind,
O god! Be right route
To concentrate my thoughts

Hasty heart when rise,
With the world which cries,
O god! Be perfect parent
To love me till I die



                      by:-
                      Vrushani Thaker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 5:46 AM
Excellent poetry Vrushani. Love, Carol I have sent you a soupmail
Mumo Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 8:47 AM
This is remarkable poetry Mr Thaker, keep on keeping on!
Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 8:01 AM
I am having a contest featuring poets from outside the USA please add your skill, let us FEEL what it's like to live where you live? Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
December 22, 2010 at 5:01 AM
This is quite emotional and devotional at the same time, Vrushani
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December 21, 2010 at 11:29 PM
enjoyed this awesome poem Vrushani, Harry
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