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'when Things Fall Apart'

If it faded with time Why do I see your face so clearly If our love has evaporated Why do I feel the connection stronger than ever Did you know that fear has the ability to make you shy away from the one thing you are suppose to pursue If this is you walking away Please take your memories with you Please take the scent of your cologne as well Please take all the gentle reminders of us with as well I don't want to be reminded of what we had I want to remember that I lived before you entered my life I also want to stand tall knowing that love does not break you when it ends It makes you remember that even if things fall apart You can still stand up, put one foot in front of the other and still continue to live ©215003042018

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/10/2022 2:34:00 AM

A journey of strength, Wilma, love it! Love, james

Wilma Neels
Date: 1/10/2022 6:59:00 PM

Thank you James! Hope you are good :-)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/4/2019 8:56:00 AM

and still continue to live... so true... it is hard... sometimes... but true... hugs... loved the write. Ann

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/30/2019 4:22:00 AM

Those are important words and they resonate with me. Been there and got the T-shirt. And found myself in the process as well as new love. Kind wishes, Kai

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/17/2018 10:39:00 PM

Hi wilma, you have put a lot of consideration into this strongly worded write, good to read your words all the best.'

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/16/2018 4:20:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/3/2018 8:40:00 PM

Very well written, Wilma. A voice of experience? I really never got the "ill will" thing, when a relationship comes to an end. You can't make someone feel what they don't feel, especially your hurt. We know one thing for certain, change is happening perpetually, that includes feelings. Wonderful to read you again:)

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/3/2018 3:53:00 PM

I don't see why not...You expressed your heart...Can't say for sure...it'll be as you say... but many wish it that way...All the best Wilma...

Wilma Neels
Date: 4/3/2018 4:05:00 PM

Hi Arturo, luckily this is not a personal piece. Just my mind and the things I sometimes think of.. Thank you for your comment