When Then

When then shall I hear? Then when will you marry daughter dear? When then some weight I must lose. Then when is the latest date you can choose? 21/01/2020 For Jenish Somadas's contest WHEN and THEN

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Viv Wigley

Date: 2/9/2020 10:36:00 PM

When then matters not, you hardly need to lose a lot x

Jean Murray
Date: 2/10/2020 11:36:00 AM

I agree I have to say, but I only noticed the other day. Since November I have been trying, now all those fat cells are dying. While filling up the bath last night, between my thighs a glimmer of light. Once again my cheeks have a hollow, hoping my double chin will follow. My diet has completely changed as steadfastly I remain true to the book that caught my eye. It's name?? How Not To Die.

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/21/2020 5:34:00 PM

I'm trying to figure out where this came from. You look fine to me:)Let's just say if you were close by you would not have any trouble getting my attention.

Jean Murray
Date: 1/21/2020 6:30:00 PM

How sweet of you to say Daniel, now you have seen my screen. I have already lost 5kg. Watch this space as they say. There should be more of it!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/21/2020 2:31:00 PM

Well, you'd certainly want to look your best Jean. Good luck. Tom

Jean Murray
Date: 1/21/2020 5:19:00 PM

Of course Tom. One does have to look one's best.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2020 1:48:00 PM

- Unconditional love does not ask for weight, my friend :) ... what about tomorrow ... great written :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 1/21/2020 5:18:00 PM

Hi Sunshine. I forgot to mention it's my daughter I am speaking to. I shall be the (fattish) mother of the bride....LOL.