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When Their Whispers Became Too Loud

In the stillness of darkness mockery, lies, gossips like air arise dragging you down, for a penny sake Abuse of power just for wealth. Who would have thought of these silent moves? Cheating on a poor innocent While still in a dungeon of fire in a gloomy weekly days and nights in lost paradise. The so-called "smile" is a shadowed for the world to see, but the cruelty it brings into reality. A smile that wears a mask, sarcasm and insults that leave behind a scar. 'Till a dame's untouched heart broke Lonely, weary and dreary. No one cared, nor listened. In the name of Penny. Still, I wait for the beaming light above, the everlasting hope in my heart will never fade. I won’t let evil take root in me— only the Spirit, somewhere, somehow, guiding me to make my deeds upright.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 7/28/2025 12:49:00 AM

I know firsthand how betrayal and malicious rumors may leave indelible marks in locations where serene surroundings were anticipated. It's wise to keep a level head and not let bitterness or wickedness take seed in your soul.

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/28/2025 1:03:00 AM

Absolutely—I feel that deeply. Betrayal and rumors can cut the sharpest, especially where we once felt safe. But choosing not to let bitterness take root is real strength. Peace of mind is worth protecting.

Valsa George

Date: 7/27/2025 9:50:00 PM

We live in an unfeeling world of lies, cruelty and deceit. No one cares for others ' sufferings as all are in a rat race to amass wealth. Yet one can live in hope that one day he/she will be heralded into real freedom and light. What we need to do is not let evil take root in us. A beautiful message you have delivered for those who grope in the pain of isolation and captivity. Have a great week ahead, Rowena!

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 9:54:00 PM

Thank you so much for your thoughtful and heartfelt words. It's true—we live in a world that often feels numbed by self-interest and silent to suffering. But hope remains our anchor, and choosing not to let evil take root in us is its own quiet form of resistance. Wishing you a week filled with light, peace, and meaningful connections.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/27/2025 8:43:00 PM

Power... wealth... Vanity, vanity, all is vanity. When will the world ever learn? Never. Every generation's leaders and titans of business simply reinvent the same old wheel. No trust in the One Who is ready to answer their call...

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 8:44:00 PM

So true. It’s like history keeps looping—chasing power and wealth, only to end up empty. Vanity wrapped in new packaging. If only more would truly seek the One who never changes, who’s always ready to answer… maybe then, the wheel would finally stop spinning.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/27/2025 4:39:00 PM

I appreciate both the softness and strength of your words. I identify with your words and agree with your conviction: I won’t let evil take root in me only the Spirit, I love and appreciate your poetic voice...I look forward to reading your poems, hugs, Sara

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 7:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara. It’s comforting to know we share the same heart for truth and healing. Hugs back to you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/27/2025 4:39:00 PM

A powerful message. Human nature is two sides of the same knife. Only God can temper man’s cruelty.

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 7:39:00 PM

So true—human nature really does cut both ways. Grateful we have God's grace to help soften the edges.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/27/2025 3:57:00 PM

The Holy Spirit leads, and the darkness where one had sought light is revealed through the Light, because it is exposed. I understand that places where solace and peace were to be expected but through treachery and gossip lead to the deepest scars. You're right to not allow evil to root in your spirit nor become bitter. I'm glad you have found Poetrysoup. Hugs & peace to you Rowena, may the Lord heal your broken heart, that kind of pain truly hurts, I know. Thanks for your visits to my poems <3

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 7:38:00 PM

Thank you so much for your heartfelt words and deep understanding. Yes, it’s true—when the Light reveals the truth, even the darkest places lose their power. Your message brought comfort to my spirit. I'm grateful for this space on PoetrySoup and for voices like yours that reflect compassion and truth. Hugs and peace to you as well. May the Lord continue to bless and strengthen your heart.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/27/2025 11:09:00 AM

The right choice to choose the Holy Spirit to reside within us. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I hope you will always listen to the Holy Spirit. Sara K

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 7:37:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. Yes, choosing to let the Holy Spirit dwell within truly brings peace and guidance. I pray the same for you—may we both continue to listen with open hearts. Blessings always.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/27/2025 10:46:00 AM

First sins: pride, jealousy, greed, murder…so many follow…all of us humans put on likewise sins. Thankfully we have a merciful and gracious God who sacrifices, seeks after us, but doesn’t choose for us.

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 7:36:00 PM

Beautifully said—so true. We carry so much, yet His mercy is always reaching out. Grateful beyond words.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2025 10:35:00 AM

- People are skilled at abusing power, ridiculing or belittling others... it hurts terribly and leaves deep scars - A poem of truth... skillfully written, Rowena :) - hugs

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 7:36:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words and understanding. It's comforting to know the message resonated. Hugs back to you

Tom Woody

Date: 7/27/2025 5:42:00 AM

Powerful poetry Rowena. "In the name of Penny ." Curious about the meaning of that line. A little help?

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 7:23:00 AM

Yes Tom, it's almighty dollar..

Tom Woody
Date: 7/27/2025 6:42:00 AM

Ahhh here in the USA it's often referred to as the almighty dollar. Got it thx Ro

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 6:31:00 AM

Thanks for asking! In this poem, “In the name of Penny” means how money is valued over people—how greed and profit can overshadow kindness and humanity. It’s about the pain of being seen as less because of that. Glad it sparked your curiosity!

John Fleming

Date: 7/27/2025 5:06:00 AM

Very poignant, intriguing; could almost be an epitaph for Princess Diana. I enjoy your writing style, Rowena...it is elusive and provocative. :) john

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 6:25:00 AM

Thanks so much, John! That’s such an interesting take—hadn’t thought of it that way, but I can see it now. Really appreciate your kind words!