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When the Wrong Train Becomes Right

Life is filled with many different journeys trying to work out the one for you whether that's a person or just a place it's figuring out for you if it's true THere's that station just off the main street checking the timetable what will it mean? your train has gone just a minute slow on the platform you stand all be seen Take the next train come along the line where to? who cares you just gotta go down the line it came right on time was this supposed to be but you never know There you take your seat first-class looking out of the clear glass so very fast along the way, one so stunning entered sits directly across indeed my die is cast Her beauty so breathtaking to intake so thankful I missed that train so late our eyes met instantly never want to leave the wrong train was right showing life is great! ('Sometimes the wrong train will take you to the right station' - quote from the movie ' The Lunchbox' )

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Date: 9/26/2019 12:26:00 AM
Believing that "God makes no mistakes," I enjoy His direction even in my train-journey. Thanks for the wisdom you shared in your piece. (Thanks likewise for your constant messages of encouragement.) God bless you.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/26/2019 2:42:00 AM
Thanks Beata, Glad you enjoyed it and its good to encourage one another in our fight against the enemy of satan for God is our anchor. God bless, Gordon
Date: 9/19/2019 8:30:00 PM
Sounds like a train called fate Gordon. Many things we think are accidental, are things that happen for a reason. We just have to be able to discover the reason. Nice poem. Blessings, Susan
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/20/2019 3:12:00 AM
Thanks Susan, Glad you liked it. Have a nice day, Gordon
Date: 9/12/2019 5:18:00 PM
Everything is meant to be... As my mentor used to say: "Consider the Source!" Thanks, Gordon. Best wishes, gw
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/12/2019 5:21:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, glad you liked it, best wishes,Gordon
Date: 9/12/2019 11:56:00 AM
Lucky move, great journey, meant to be - lovely poem Gordon, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/12/2019 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Jenny, glad you enjoyed it and trust all well. Blessings and hugs,Gordon
Date: 9/12/2019 11:13:00 AM
So beautifully written Gordon!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 2:06:00 PM
All good for now! Anyway! Lol!;)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/12/2019 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, glad you loved it and trust all good at home, poetry hugs,Gordon

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