When the Time Comes

Hope that at the end
I’ve not left anything on the table
that all was said and done
and I’d lived life to its fullest



AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 4:57 PM
I hope for the same thing--no unfinished business. well said, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 6:04 PM
Thank you very much for your lovely visit and comment, Sara ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Hello Lin, this poem does sound a bit gloomy. I hope you are okay and this isi only a poem. Are yhou feeling okay? Hugs./Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 4:40 PM
Hello Lin, oh, I am happy to hear you are fine. I thought something serious happened. I am glad you are okay. Hugs. /Darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 11:47 AM
Hi Darlene, Everything is good ~ this poem is just a reminder to live life to its fullest ~
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