Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- When the Sun Goes Down -

The scent of humble flowers
                                        which graced the day
                                     Moments that have stuck
                                      reality written on stone
                                       Experience is learning
                                   The joy of nature's miracles
                                     - trapped, some might say
                                         The sky colored gold
                                    the rays don't heat anymore
                                                  But still:
                                a little piece of one's golden heart
                                     - saturated with pollen dust




23.05.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Inspired by: "Before the sun goes down"
written by : Demetrios Trifiatis  23 May 2023

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Darlene De Beaulieu May 24, 2023 at 11:59 AM Hello Sunshine Smile , when the sun goes down it is beautiful. to to see the golden rays light up the river. To see to see the golden color in the water reflect. Hugs /Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu May 24, 2023 at 4:06 PM Hello Sunshine Smile oh thank you for sharing this wirh me. I would enjoy that sunset. Hugs. /Darlene/ Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2023 at 12:06 PM - In this minute I have a beautiful sunset outside my window ... I would like to share this moment with you, Darlene :) - The sun sets in the sea :) - Thank you very much for your words :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick May 24, 2023 at 5:10 AM I like the line, "moments that have stuck". Sometimes those are lovely moments in our lives that live on. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2023 at 12:07 PM - Memories that never go away, Sara :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis May 24, 2023 at 2:47 AM A marvel of a poem. The real poetry for me is seen between the lines, my dearest friend of eleven years, Anne-Lise. Thank you. Blessings. Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2023 at 3:00 AM - Your wisdom, the joy of nature, flowers ... and words of truth ("written on stone") ... glad you liked it, my friend :) - 11 years ... and more will come :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar May 24, 2023 at 2:06 AM Give me sunset every night. I love it. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2023 at 2:42 AM - Victor, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Yann Rolland May 24, 2023 at 12:59 AM i love sunset, what a graceful scenery thanks Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2023 at 2:41 AM - Every sunset is unique, thank you for your kindness Yann :) - hugs

Jay Narain May 23, 2023 at 5:48 PM Nice poem. Sunset is always scenic. Love the end couplet, Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2023 at 2:40 AM - Many thanks for the kind comment, Jay :) - hugs

Frederic Parker May 23, 2023 at 12:29 PM Really nice poem, you can tell by my avatar I really like sunsets dear poet Anne-Lise Andresen May 23, 2023 at 1:15 PM - I hardly ever see sunrises... way too early for me, Frederic :))) - But, I enjoy every sunset - Many thanks for your comment ... always nice to see you :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 23, 2023 at 12:13 PM I loved being transported to this blissful sunset scene, and especially enjoyed the final two lines, Anne-Lise. :) Anne-Lise Andresen May 23, 2023 at 1:20 PM - Sunset makes me humble ... very aware that everything has its time in this life and everything has an end - Many thanks, Evelyn :)

Sotto Poet May 23, 2023 at 10:38 AM Nature never stops to stimulate our muse, Anne-Lise. Fantastic, interesting lines throughout your poem. Anne-Lise Andresen May 23, 2023 at 10:52 AM - That's true, Las ... many thanks for your comment :) - hugs