When the Sun Dies

As sure as number one is followed by two You can count on my love to always be true When the sun finally dies Disappears from the sky I'll forever love you through and through
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Charming.
Ellison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Thank you friend!!! Have a great evening!!!!
Cresswell Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Sweet as cotton candy!
Ellison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Yummy!!! Don't know what got into me!!! Not just another pretty face, told ya!!!! lol xxx
Flats Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 8:07 AM
If that don't take the cake!//Sentiment to make one ache//Number two here//drinking a beer//with my funnel cake. GOOD MORNING JACKSON YOU OLD SOFTIE!!!
Ellison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 8:21 AM
There are MANY sides to this old flake!!! GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN!!!
One Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 5:26 AM
awww you big softie!
Ellison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 5:48 AM
I know, I know... that's why all the ladies love me!!! Jealous??? lol
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