When the Sun Comes

Out of a wild rain storm
In the wings
The sun stands nervous
On cue but with notes she hadn't planned
Feathered and caught by reaction
she hides her beauty
For so hot 
Herself burns true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 5:26 AM
Creative work about the amazing sun which is set just so that the earth can come alive. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Mcconnell Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Nice piece of brevity Jo with nice good imagery and insightfulness. We've had a mixed day having gone with a t-shirt and shorts so got caught in rain coming off the bus so a hot shower required to heat me up! xx
Hayton Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 2:47 PM
Thanks Gordon. Yes can't beat Northern weather, never know where you are ??, thankyou for lovely comments x
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