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When the Stars Looked My Way

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[ hear the song ]

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rain fell with riddles
chalk dust tumbled from my hands
I loved the schoolyard —
learned questions I had not asked—
left un-quenched thirst in my mouth

seashell in my hand
I pressed it hard to my ear
I heard sea strumming —
calling me like it knew me
until tide drew my voyage

clocks ran without me
their teeth grinding daylight down
turning gold to dust —
the clocks ignored me this time
grinding unfazed without me

shadows curled inwards
I traced darkness in my pulse
then folded the chart —
the stars no longer led me
to go gently into night

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