Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- When the Soul Is Clean -

Magic dust shooting into starlight pearls as the scents begin wafting 
Around the planet's curve circling warmly embracing on vision 

Glittering golden gleams sparkle through colours of a promise
Kissed green eyes to hide her warm tears open up 

In the promises we give to others for keeps 
Rainbows hold until the end enchanting tales 

Silk buried softly underneath the bouquet a rose grows 
Not forgetting the inner promises we give unto ourselves 

Romancing a poem under the pillow no one knows 
Petals freezing winter moon holding warmly drunken   

Wrapped up under one star winks cotton white angel holding deeply wings 
Held upright pleasing the heart pure soul inside the glory of the stars shine 

Fear and destruction of earthly paradise we live
Over and back dancing butterflies waltz freely taken 

We need beautiful fairy tales and angels songs 
As the sun rise kisses a gold circle treasures found 

A man can not be changed by place or time, but of love
Memories are born inside where a diamond cut princess dwells 

Luxurious and delicious feelings ~
enveloped softly in your wing









A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
15.12.2016
(unrhymed couplets)
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Jagdish Pal January 13, 2017 at 1:59 AM Really a great and inspiring poem! Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2017 at 5:28 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Jagdish :) - hugs :)

Estela Canama January 9, 2017 at 2:01 AM Such a great poem! Thank you for sharing, Sunshine. God bless! Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2017 at 2:50 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poems Estela - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs :)

Robert Lindley January 5, 2017 at 9:40 AM WONDERFUL POEM MY FRIEND. I just posted a romantic poem about my earthly angel this morn! Your verses sing magnificently to me!A7 Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2017 at 11:46 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, and a 7, Robert :) - hugs :)

Edward Snyder January 3, 2017 at 8:44 AM Waltzing butterflies nice write Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2017 at 11:45 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Edward :) - hugs :)

Len Gasun December 26, 2016 at 1:07 AM You and Liam always write a stunning collaboration my dear friend! Thumbs up on this excellent masterpiece! A super 7. Thank you so much for sharing. I wish you both all the best on this wonderful Christmas Season! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen December 26, 2016 at 2:27 PM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, and a super 7, Leonora :) - hugs :)

Eileen Manassian December 18, 2016 at 9:03 PM You two romance a poem well... :) fantasy or reality.....the lines speak of both. Hugs to you both.... Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2016 at 3:28 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem, Eileen :) - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs :)

CayCay Godwin December 17, 2016 at 8:52 PM You two get my favorite response, the one I use when I'm totally awed: WOW WOW WOW - Love it to the moon - it is sheer beauty - absolutely sheer beauty ... CayCay (maybe law should require you collaborate more!) Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2016 at 8:10 AM - Always a pleasure to mix ink with my friend Liam, CayCay :) - We greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 17, 2016 at 11:54 AM A very special holiday collab offering, Anne-Lise and Liam. Pixie dust poem has a magical allure. Gorgeous imagery showcased. You two work well together like a glove in hand. Love the poem too. Much love to you, dear lady. Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2016 at 12:53 PM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Freddie :) - hugs :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 17, 2016 at 8:57 AM Another dazzling collaboration crowned by incomparable beauty! A seven to each of you! dear Anne-Lise and dear, Liam! Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2016 at 12:53 PM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs :)

Supraja Kannan December 17, 2016 at 7:59 AM What a lovely title and a beautiful collaboration Anne... Really beautiful... A big 7... Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2016 at 12:52 PM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Supraja :) - hugs :)

Winged Warrior December 16, 2016 at 11:21 PM A crafty couplet from a great couple...beautifully executed...god bless...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2016 at 7:48 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, W.W. :) - hugs :)

Street Poet December 16, 2016 at 9:37 AM Good one dear Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 1:13 PM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, S. Poet :) - hugs :)

Gary Bateman December 16, 2016 at 7:48 AM Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! A wondrous, powerful, and imagery-laden masterpiece by you and Liam. Each one of the ten couplets created a word picture-portrait of their own. This one's a TR and a FAV of mine!! Best Christmas Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Gary Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 1:23 PM - Very pleased you really enjoyed our poem, Gary :) - Many thanks for the pleasant visit "tr.+ fav:" on "When The Soul Is Clean" - We greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs and Christmas wishes // Anne-Lise :)

Doug Vinson December 16, 2016 at 2:44 AM (Hey wait a minute - "When The Soul Is Clean" - am I even allowed to read this?" ; ) This is an incredibly rich poem, the chain of actions, the verbs used - they all wash over the reader, a big 'Wow!' Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 3:42 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Doug :) - hugs :)

Liam Mcdaid December 15, 2016 at 5:56 PM your pen anne lise ran pure sunlight through this a pleasure sharing ink with you this sings in a beautiful song reading it again wishing you a blessing of a day pal Freddie Robinson Jr. December 17, 2016 at 11:51 AM Beautiful imagery encased in this golden ink poem, Liam and Anne-Lise. Wonderful collab. You two have special chemistry. Love and joy to you both. Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 3:44 AM - Always a pleasure, Liam - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud December 15, 2016 at 4:23 PM another jewel from you and liam--- wonderful work, anne!..happy huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 3:42 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Nette :) - hugs :)

Kevin Leake December 15, 2016 at 10:49 AM Very very Beautiful Anne, A brilliant collaboration!! Enjoyed every word Best wishes to you both Kevin Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 3:42 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Kevin :) - hugs :)

Robert Lindley December 15, 2016 at 9:59 AM This is tops in so many ways. Every couplet a gem! Congrats to both authors on this great collaboration.... Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 3:41 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Robert :) - hugs :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy December 15, 2016 at 9:52 AM Wonderful! When the soul is clean, every thing or matter around is neat and clean. Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 3:41 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Abdullah :) - hugs :)

Daniel Turner December 15, 2016 at 9:48 AM Another wonderful collaboration from You and Liam. That final couplet, is the icing on another sweet write, Anne Lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 3:40 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Daniel :) - hugs :)

Lim'Rik Flats December 15, 2016 at 9:04 AM Wowsa! I feel like I'm wrapped in a big hug. Thanks! Very berry loverly guys. huggaflitters ~ john Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 3:40 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, John :) - hugs :)

Dorian Petersen Potter December 15, 2016 at 7:41 AM Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2016 at 3:38 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit at Liam and my poem - When The Soul Is Clean - We greatly appreciate your comments, Dorian :) - hugs :)