When the Snow Melts

When the snow melts, there is joy all around,
Freshness uplifts our senses, hope is born,
Beryl scenes are once more seen on the ground,
When the snow melts, there is joy all around,
Life in varied hues on which zest is found,
Tangerine streaks unfurl this azure morn,
When the snow melts, there is joy all around,
Freshness uplifts our senses, hope is born;

Beryl scenes are once more seen on the ground,
When the snow melts, there is joy all around,
Life in varied hues on which zest is found;
Tangerine streaks unfurl this azure morn,
Freshness uplifts our senses, hope is born,
Delightful times, when Spring comes to adorn.


06.10.2021



For Milton Hankins' "Write a 'Trionet' for me" contest

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Date: 7/7/2021 10:12:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win. Wonderful use of words to create such a vivid scene of freedom when the snow melts! Enjoyed this viseral picture very much. Blessings!
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Date: 7/2/2021 12:05:00 PM
so lovely and uplifting Jo I love the transition of the season to season many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx:-) hugs
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Date: 6/23/2021 1:12:00 PM
Wonderful Triolet Jo, sounds like a sure winner to me , very well penned. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/14/2021 5:44:00 PM
Ar the changing seasons you paint a picture well Every season has its good and bad parts well penned
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Date: 6/13/2021 11:39:00 PM
This is a beautiful trionet I have ever read.With full of lovely scenes and uplifting words. Reads like a winner...
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Date: 6/13/2021 5:51:00 PM
And the first Robin always thrills me. Love it when they come back because I know soon it will be sunny and warm again and my garden will be in bloom. Good job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/13/2021 11:07:00 AM
A superb penning, Jo:-) All the best for a win in the contest!
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Date: 6/12/2021 3:37:00 PM
A welcome sight to see, the Melting snow soon heralds the arrival of spring. Good luck in the contest Jo, hope you are having a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 6/11/2021 4:09:00 PM
I love winter and all its beautiful white scene, thank you for refreshing my mind tonight Jo :)
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Date: 6/11/2021 9:00:00 AM
Wow! Jo, You painted such a lovely picture with words. Your imagery, it's just breathtaking. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/10/2021 8:44:00 PM
Great imagery in your poem, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/10/2021 12:46:00 PM
I enjoyed this wonderful sonnet, Jo, and it is greatly enhanced by the beauty of the repeating lines. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 6/10/2021 12:06:00 PM
Hello Jo Daniel, yes it is joy to see the snow melt. It is also great to see the brown grass turn slowly green. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 6/10/2021 9:59:00 AM
Jo, This is a wonderful poem in snow's end. One with 'Delightful' in the ending couplet. An apt place to be. -Richard
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Date: 6/10/2021 6:16:00 AM
Lovely, vividly descriptive piece, Jo--made me smile! Janice
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