Joanna Daniel Poet Sonnet

When the Snow Melts

When the snow melts, there is joy all around,
Freshness uplifts our senses, hope is born,
Beryl scenes are once more seen on the ground,
When the snow melts, there is joy all around,
Life in varied hues on which zest is found,
Tangerine streaks unfurl this azure morn,
When the snow melts, there is joy all around,
Freshness uplifts our senses, hope is born;

Beryl scenes are once more seen on the ground,
When the snow melts, there is joy all around,
Life in varied hues on which zest is found;
Tangerine streaks unfurl this azure morn,
Freshness uplifts our senses, hope is born,
Delightful times, when Spring comes to adorn.


06.10.2021



For Milton Hankins' "Write a 'Trionet' for me" contest

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Sam Kauffman July 7, 2021 at 10:12 AM Jo, congratulations on your win. Wonderful use of words to create such a vivid scene of freedom when the snow melts! Enjoyed this viseral picture very much. Blessings!

Jan Allison July 2, 2021 at 12:05 PM so lovely and uplifting Jo I love the transition of the season to season many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx:-) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos June 23, 2021 at 1:12 PM Wonderful Triolet Jo, sounds like a sure winner to me , very well penned. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

David Scott June 14, 2021 at 5:44 PM Ar the changing seasons you paint a picture well Every season has its good and bad parts well penned

Supraja Kannan June 13, 2021 at 11:39 PM This is a beautiful trionet I have ever read.With full of lovely scenes and uplifting words. Reads like a winner...

Judy Ball June 13, 2021 at 5:51 PM And the first Robin always thrills me. Love it when they come back because I know soon it will be sunny and warm again and my garden will be in bloom. Good job here. God Bless, JB

Edward Ibeh June 13, 2021 at 11:07 AM A superb penning, Jo:-) All the best for a win in the contest!

Tom Cunningham June 12, 2021 at 3:37 PM A welcome sight to see, the Melting snow soon heralds the arrival of spring. Good luck in the contest Jo, hope you are having a lovely weekend. Tom

Mystic Rose Rose June 11, 2021 at 4:09 PM I love winter and all its beautiful white scene, thank you for refreshing my mind tonight Jo :)

Alexis Y. June 11, 2021 at 9:00 AM Wow! Jo, You painted such a lovely picture with words. Your imagery, it's just breathtaking. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Eve Roper June 10, 2021 at 8:44 PM Great imagery in your poem, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 10, 2021 at 12:46 PM I enjoyed this wonderful sonnet, Jo, and it is greatly enhanced by the beauty of the repeating lines. Best of wishes for the contest. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu June 10, 2021 at 12:06 PM Hello Jo Daniel, yes it is joy to see the snow melt. It is also great to see the brown grass turn slowly green. Enjoy your day my friend.

Quoth Theraven June 10, 2021 at 9:59 AM Jo, This is a wonderful poem in snow's end. One with 'Delightful' in the ending couplet. An apt place to be. -Richard

Janice Canerdy June 10, 2021 at 6:16 AM Lovely, vividly descriptive piece, Jo--made me smile! Janice