When the sky leans close

When the Sky Leans Close

The air quivers,  
a soft shiver slipping across my skin  
as if the storm is exhaling  
right beside me.  

Thunder swells in the distance,  
a slow, resonant hunger,  
calling through the dark  
with a voice that feels  
too intimate for weather.  

Lightning unfurls like a touch  
that hasn’t quite touched—  
a bright, trembling nearness  
that makes my breath catch  
before I know why.  

Ionized air gathers around me,  
metallic and clean,  
a taste that feels like anticipation  
held on the tongue.  

The vibration climbs inward,  
curling through bone and breath,  
a rising warmth that feels  
almost like being wanted  
by something vast and unseen.  

Nature presses closer,  
not with force  
but with a kind of deliberate curiosity,  
as if the sky is studying  
the shape of my pulse.  

Uncertainty sharpens into thrill,  
a beautiful tension  
that hums beneath the ribs,  
pulling me toward the storm  
as though we share  
a secret frequency.  

Joy blooms hot and bright,  
a euphoric ache,  
a spiritual sweetness  
that feels like being touched  
by something made of light.  

And when the thunder finally breaks,  
the sound rolls through me  
like a slow, consuming embrace—  
not violent,  
not gentle,  
just inevitable,  
as if the sky and I  
have been moving toward this moment  
for lifetimes.
Caroline Louise Foister 1/19/2026
Robert James Liguon
Tempest contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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