When the Ship Sank

(When the ship sank)

When the ship sank I was on deck, my flute
sang a holiday, my legs were trembling like a whale
Cabin sat on whiskers, spills swerved the seas.
Dennis was close hey hey,check the wind,check the wind
Cool like frigidity lady whupped the deck
Metals creaked all hell let loose hulls croaked
Like frump unattached to the muscle of hope.

When the ship sank I was on deck, my flute
sang a holiday, and after a year or so my ribs
found another deck chomped my sea animals
corralled by weeds blue, brown, pink and red
You may say its just a story, well said and sad.


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© RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
16th November,2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/17/2014 1:12:00 PM
Those poems were titled, "Aboard The Titanic" and "Aboard The Titanic - Part 2"
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/17/2014 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Kelly, Love XXXXX RAJAT
Date: 11/17/2014 12:18:00 AM
A very haunting tale you have told here, Rajat. Your vivid descriptions give the reader a feeling of being there on that deck. Good work!... I have written two poems about being onboard the Titanic. You might like to read them!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/17/2014 4:43:00 AM
This is the dedication to the intrepid sailors who ruled the seas through the ages. Great comments Kelly. I will read your poems.Love and take care XXXXX RAJAT
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