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When the Rains Ended

When the Rains Ended When the rains came, you cocooned yourself between my breasts, into the branches of my heart, feeding off my love, drinking my life’s blood… like a vampire, growing stronger, as I grew weaker. When the rains ended, you fluttered your newly-grown wings and swiftly flew away, never looking back, to perch on a rainbow painted on cobalt blue sky… just as black birds foretold. 05-20-2019

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/12/2021 10:51:00 AM

Powerful Emotions in this Pandita'

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/2/2022 7:06:00 PM

Thanks so much Joe for your insightful comments! Pandita

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/23/2019 12:16:00 PM

Stunning work Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/23/2019 12:39:00 PM

Hi Allen, I truly appreciate your lovely complimentary words! Thank you so much! Best regards. Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 5/23/2019 7:54:00 AM

Great write Pandita...Good to see you!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/23/2019 9:01:00 AM

Awwww - thank you, my friend, Joseph! It's really good to hear from you! Hope your day is great! Love and hugs. Pandita

Warren Doll

Date: 5/21/2019 5:43:00 PM

Hi Pandita, so glad you are back. Giving all to someone who just leaves without a care. Well written. All the best~Warren

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/21/2019 9:44:00 PM

Hello Warren, thank you so much my friend for your warm welcome and lovely compliments that I appreciate! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/21/2019 4:50:00 PM

Enjoyed this enchanting poem immensely, Pandita. Nice to view your work again! It's a treat. Best wishes, Gershon

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/21/2019 9:42:00 PM

Hi Gershon, it is so nice to be back and to hear from you! I've been working on some academic projects that required my complete attention. But now I can devote more time here! Thank you kindly for your wonderful supportive compliments! Love and hugs. Pandita

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/21/2019 3:46:00 PM

Wonderful rendering to enlighten Pandita, Aloha wk

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/21/2019 9:38:00 PM

Hi William, thank you for visiting and leaving your kind compliment! Best regards. Pandita

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/21/2019 7:37:00 AM

When the rains came..and then when the rains ended..I see and feel that contrast you presented..Isn't life wonderful! A meaningful write, Pandita..don't see you much these days on Soup.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/21/2019 10:21:00 AM

Dear Vijay, thank you so much for your lovely comments/compliments which I appreciate! I should be back writing again as I just completed an academic program that needed my full attention. Hugs and best regards. Pandita