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When the Party Is Over

I felt like venting, releasing steam Almost like reflecting a dream People blend and people go Still I don't pretend to know You change and I hit the floor These chains just weigh more If we close the blinds and hide I suppose they won't mind Kick everyone out, it's too loud Pull the curtains, end it now Put on pink or just the mink I need a drink so I can think They say love has a sweetness But it's not above a wet kiss I'll treat you right and dim the lights It's just us tonight, forgetting fights

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/4/2013 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Mitch. Your winning write can speak for many red blooded men.... Jake
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/27/2013 5:22:00 PM
most enjoyable congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/27/2013 1:42:00 PM
Hello Mitch, stopping by this one again... thank you for enjoying my campfire poem... yes I have a wild side... hahaha! Now I own 4 cars, and i figure my wild side is crazy and loves wasting money like crazy... anyways -Congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:21:00 AM
Interesting winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/26/2013 6:41:00 PM
Mitch nicely written. Co granulation a on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/24/2013 9:46:00 AM
an attitude well written. Mitch its always great to be what we are.loved the write (:cJenish.
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Date: 7/23/2013 11:40:00 PM
yes, hit the lights and get everybody out of there!!! Loved that part about wearing pink. or just wear mink!! An entertaining poem.
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Date: 7/23/2013 7:29:00 AM
Perfect !! That wonderful blend of love and frustration, mixed with a bit of passion. First time I am stopping by your site.. will read more.
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Date: 7/22/2013 9:27:00 AM
crazy how we can easily forget in one moment to another, enjoyed your ~always, Linda
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