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When the Old Sun Hides

The sun was at its prime, With it's warm rays touching the soul Accompanied by a subtle sway of wind chime, It turned the poet's heart gay, Without a single letter to say. The clouds decided to steal What the heart wanted to feel, As it hid the sun from view, With a laugh that pleased few. The poet wished the old sun to return, Which seemed to have vanished In its voyage, never to back turn. Oh! Exclaimed the poet with sorrow Is this the darkness that surrounds the tomorrow? The darkness blessed the earth with shower, That gave life itself its power. Now colours of the spectrum Ventured across the dark sky Forming a sun new, Though dimmer, Nevertheless beautiful. ---Ranaditya Adhikary

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Date: 1/16/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thought I would check out your very first post. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/8/2023 12:56:00 PM
Hi Ranaditya. It is true, without the dark, we would not know light. Very nicely written :)
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Date: 12/10/2022 9:51:00 AM
Dear Ranaditya, your poetic artistry radiates with expressive imagery so idyllic at first, then flawed with sorrow, to then finding beauty again across the dark sky. I adore your use of Nature and metaphor; "The clouds decided to steal What the heart wanted to feel, As it hid the sun from view, With a laugh that pleased few." - magnificent! Such a stunning poem, my friend, and a great first post here. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/9/2022 7:29:00 AM
Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2022 5:56:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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