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When the night comes

When the night comes..... When the night comes then my tears wet my pillow because you are not close to me and living far away My nights become sleepless, dreamless and hopeless and I feel that I am lost and don't know what to do You are the love of my life that brings happiness to me and there is no meaning to my life without you The big distance put me through painful thoughts on you and those Saturday nights bring me nothing but empty life The moon's reflection enters into my bedroom with romance but I stay there alone without your love as lonely The stars are over-crowded in the sky like diamonds but I am nailed down without your love like a saint The nights are very cold and you are not here to hold me and bring you under my arms with passion of love Tell me how to say good night when my eyes are not closing for sleep without you being here Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2106 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 12/18/2016 7:47:00 PM
Separation is good, if there is hope to be united again... pleasant dream...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 2/24/2017 4:13:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 12/10/2016 1:44:00 AM
Hi Ravi, as Andrea says a very emotional poem, reminds me so much of when Peter was away in Vietnam and I found it hard to sleep not knowing what was going on over there, will he come home or not, to be honest with you it was a nightmare so you have hit close to home with this one,thank you, take care.......Vera
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/11/2016 2:15:00 AM
Thank you very much for comment on my poem. Very much appreciated.
Date: 12/7/2016 12:28:00 AM
a lovely emotive poem, Ravi! Hope it's not true.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/7/2016 11:51:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend Andrea. Very much appreciated. Hugs.
Date: 12/5/2016 11:40:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem Ravi.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/7/2016 11:52:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend Tim . Very much appreciated.
Date: 12/5/2016 10:04:00 AM
Very romantic writing that touches the heart my dear, Ravi! Well done my friend!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/7/2016 11:52:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend . Very much appreciated.
Date: 12/5/2016 8:29:00 AM
Looks beautiful ... Reads nice ...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/7/2016 11:53:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend . Very much appreciated.
Date: 12/5/2016 8:05:00 AM
The longing contributes to the beauty of this poem, Ravi. Distance makes the heart grow fonder. ~ Regards // paul
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/7/2016 11:53:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Paul . Very much appreciated.
Date: 12/5/2016 8:00:00 AM
Very emotional, loss is never easy. Namaste.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/7/2016 11:53:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend . Very much appreciated.
Date: 12/5/2016 7:29:00 AM
- A beautiful poem ... with longing and tears ... touching - Best wishes for a lovely new week, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/7/2016 11:54:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Very much appreciated. Hugs and kisses xxxx