When the Night Comes

I'm waiting for the night; then my heart goes out to you Lays down on your lips, like a caressing kiss, You my eternal You

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John Fleming

Date: 7/26/2017 8:05:00 PM

Rather charming, Sir...nicely espoused. My best regards! :) john

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2016 9:12:00 AM

once again, i love your first post. skat

Skat A

Date: 3/12/2016 9:52:00 PM

Sir K., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ggg Bbb

Date: 3/9/2016 5:06:00 PM

nice one! welcome to soup, hope to hear from you more

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2016 8:55:00 AM

Sir Kristian, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2016 8:53:00 AM

Sir Kristian, Enjoyed your first post.... LOVE LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2016 4:38:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Sir Kristian - Welcome to Poetry Soup - // Anne-Lise :)

Sir Kristian Goldmund Aumann
Date: 3/9/2016 4:47:00 AM

THANK YOU, dear Anne Lise - I am GLAD to be HERE...<;0))))