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When the Music Stops

In the beginning, we played musical parts
singing the script with free-spirited hearts
Adlibbing lines without rehearsing a word.
As absurd as it sounds, quite profound
that our threads were a woven tapestry
without eyes meeting and voices never heard.

We danced, swaying like palms in the wind
Our dance steps were always in sync.
We were Fred and Ginger,
turquoise and silver... p b and j
until the day the music stopped...

In the realm where light and dark merge,
that shadowed place where docile dreams 
and hellacious nightmares converge,
we found ourselves worlds apart.

Our Utopian haven had been storm tossed
and left us swirling on a dystopian plain,
a deserted land where painful silence rules
for those who played the game of fools.

For days I've been hearing piano notes
that seem to float from memory's core.
A chance encounter, a phone call,
familiar lyrics to a musical score...
a romance rekindled?

His music once filled my head,
but I don't dance to his songs anymore.
There's never a happy ending
when nothing is left to be said.
There's no point lingering in thoughts
over a broken heart when it's mending.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Beaufort Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 12:27 PM
Hey Lin, we never know when the music will sweep us off our feet. Perhaps it's better to have doubts from the start and an understanding of the things that can derail our happiness. I think it takes finding a person open to compromise and who accepts us with our flaws....Of course at least you and I don't have any!!! LOL and Smiles. Hope you are doing well today and always!!
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 12:38 PM
A flawless human! There’s no such thing, Duke but I get your premise. Trying to stay warm. I don’t have your snowfall but will be icebound for a few days.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 11:31 AM
"When the Music Stops" is a wonderful write. A great picture. Music has away of getting into the soul and Not wanting to leave. Great memories the best kind but sometimes their bad twin shows up. Love your great/true ending. Hope you are OK... Stay warm this weekend as you go writing away.............
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 12:36 PM
In case I’ve not told you lately, Paula… I truly appreciate the time you spend reading and commenting on my poetry.
Kitchin Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 4:49 AM
Lin, a beautiful poem capturing the essence of romantic love that has ended. Full of emotion and heartbreak in your beautiful lines. Old songs remain but your heart can open for new ones again.
Lane Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 6:23 AM
Thank you so very much, Tania. Twice is enough for me.
Rodgers Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 6:58 AM
Dear Lin, made me think about how fragile connections can be, especially with those we loved the most. It is sad to think that when the music stops, there is this sudden awareness that what carried you both is gone. I hope you are doing well this winter. We are expecting 15+ inches of snow this weekend. :) Winter Blessings, Lin Daniel
Lane Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 5:42 PM
Hi, Daniel and thank you for your wise analogy about the fragility of life and love. I still hear his music, but the dance steps have changed. All is well. Stay warm this week.
Cunningham Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 10:24 PM
When the music stops the silence is deafening. It numbs you until you find the strength to bounce back. Tom
Lane Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 5:41 PM
Sometimes bouncing back seems an endless path to walk alone. Thanks, Tom.
Kauffman Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 11:19 AM
Lin, lovely use of music metaphor and images. Sad. It pulled at my heartstrings! The loss of love makes the heart grieve. So well composed. If for a contest, best wishes! Stay warm and cozy! Looks like an artic blast is headed your way! Blessings!
Lane Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 5:40 PM
Thanks, Sam.
Kauffman Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 12:02 PM
Looks like you may get your wish with this monster storm heading your way! Stay safe, warm and cozy!
Lane Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Thank you ever so much for liking my lines, Sam. It's not for a contest. I only write for a few poets who recognize the poets who enter using AI and/or plagiarized poems and refuse to award them a placement for the lack of integrity by calling those poems their own. It's been a bit chillier than normal this year... would love to see a repeat of snow, but that's probably not going to happen.
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