Deborah Turner Poet Free verse

When the Moon Comes Out At Night

When the moon comes out at night.  A battle began with the sun, to see whom will shine their light.  The fight began with the opposition to take position in the galaxy amongst the stars in the sky.  The battle end the moon win and take position from the opposition to bring us brilliant moon light.

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Kelly Deschler April 17, 2015 at 6:39 PM This is a very interesting and creative poem, Deborah. Nice work!... I also enjoy the moonlight and it has inspired a few poems from me. Deborah Turner April 17, 2015 at 9:23 PM Thanks Kelly, I will read some of your poems starting today.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri April 14, 2015 at 3:41 AM Wow as a lunar lover I so adore this fabulous creative thinking poem. I enjoyd the win of the moon as sun rays are overwhelmingly scorching and the heat here where i live doesnt feel nice as evryone wishes for cool weather and breeze. Thumbs up. Pls do review my latest poem too. Deborah Turner April 14, 2015 at 4:24 AM Hi, thank you for your enduring words. I felt kind of nervous to read the comment. Glad you had encouraging words. Now I am going to go and read your poems.