When the Goblins Came To Town

Tears were flowing when the goblins came to town,
for delight do goblins take in making people cry.
They wreak havoc, bringing everybody down.

Goblins to each neighborhood assigned themselves.
They stirred up problems; people sobbed; They even made folks die
as clever goblins had enlisted help from evil elves.

Into people’s homes elves and goblins tried to creep.
Their purpose was to touch each tear that rolled down humans’ cheeks,
for jewels are made when goblins touch the tears that people weep.

Moans and wails resounded. All the folks’ worst fears
were coming true. Pain the worst produced the best of gems.
So goblins filled their jewel box robbing from the people sobbing tears!

Aug. 10, 2021 
for Jack Webster's The Goblin’S Jewel Box 1 Poetry Contest
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Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Stolen teardrop gems...very interesting take on the theme Andrea. Well Done
Roper Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 7:47 PM
Back with congratulations.
Grasso Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 6:28 AM
I like this. It toches the rage that is in me as I watch a reckless populace surrender liberty. Your work is impeccable...Fran
Skelly Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 4:14 AM
Like this Andrea, glad you found time to enter contest. Good for a win...Delice
May Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 8:59 PM
Very nicely told story Andrea, best wishes
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 6:08 AM
Quite an original thought, Andrea--gems from tears! Enjoyed your creative story.
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 9:47 AM
it wasn't my original thought, Vijay. The contest states that we need to make gems from tears!!
Daniel Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 1:50 AM
Well, you have created a sob story out of the given theme, Andrea, brilliant:) I can't seem to think of anything for the contest...
Buhagiar Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 10:07 PM
Very entertaining. Now cry me a river...
Roper Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 9:26 PM
Very creative, Andrea. My mind is not reactive , so poems for contest.
Hankins Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 7:07 PM
Love these imaginative images that combine to tell a story. Good writing, Andrea.
Cheney Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 6:24 PM
I'm intrigued by this one. Goblins and elves stealing tears to make jewels. Quite a happening to ponder.
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