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When the Goblins Came To Town

Tears were flowing when the goblins came to town, for delight do goblins take in making people cry. They wreak havoc, bringing everybody down. Goblins to each neighborhood assigned themselves. They stirred up problems; people sobbed; They even made folks die as clever goblins had enlisted help from evil elves. Into people’s homes elves and goblins tried to creep. Their purpose was to touch each tear that rolled down humans’ cheeks, for jewels are made when goblins touch the tears that people weep. Moans and wails resounded. All the folks’ worst fears were coming true. Pain the worst produced the best of gems. So goblins filled their jewel box robbing from the people sobbing tears! Aug. 10, 2021 for Jack Webster's The Goblin’S Jewel Box 1 Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/14/2021 9:55:00 AM
Stolen teardrop gems...very interesting take on the theme Andrea. Well Done
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Date: 8/13/2021 7:47:00 PM
Back with congratulations.
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Date: 8/12/2021 6:28:00 AM
I like this. It toches the rage that is in me as I watch a reckless populace surrender liberty. Your work is impeccable...Fran
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Date: 8/12/2021 4:14:00 AM
Like this Andrea, glad you found time to enter contest. Good for a win...Delice
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Date: 8/11/2021 8:59:00 PM
Very nicely told story Andrea, best wishes
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Date: 8/11/2021 6:08:00 AM
Quite an original thought, Andrea--gems from tears! Enjoyed your creative story.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2021 9:47:00 AM
it wasn't my original thought, Vijay. The contest states that we need to make gems from tears!!
Date: 8/11/2021 1:50:00 AM
Well, you have created a sob story out of the given theme, Andrea, brilliant:) I can't seem to think of anything for the contest...
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Date: 8/10/2021 10:07:00 PM
Very entertaining. Now cry me a river...
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Date: 8/10/2021 9:26:00 PM
Very creative, Andrea. My mind is not reactive , so poems for contest.
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Date: 8/10/2021 7:07:00 PM
Love these imaginative images that combine to tell a story. Good writing, Andrea.
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Date: 8/10/2021 6:24:00 PM
I'm intrigued by this one. Goblins and elves stealing tears to make jewels. Quite a happening to ponder.
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