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When the Flame is Gone

When the Flame is Gone

Shared destinies through space and time,
we were twin flames on the same psychic vine.
At birth, the same bright star our fates did align,
under Gemini our ruling zodiac Sun sign;
two souls united by the same cosmic lifeline.
 
Life’s trials strengthened us for one another,
we were kindred spirits always and forever.
Linked by the same umbilical tether,
our hearts and minds mirrored each other;
and the ties that bind would be broken never.
 
Then suddenly you left me high and dry;
taking off without any kind of good-bye.
Escaping like a haunted butterfly,
you freed yourself of me, seeking the sky.
My twin flame gone, I asked, “WHY, WHY?”
I didn’t understand and I cried, I could only cry.
Today, tomorrow would all be the same,
colorless, meaningless, and I had no name.

Did you think I’d be okay with you free? 
Because you’re quite okay without me?
Did you think it’d be easy for me to forget you?
Because it’s easy for you to forget me too?
Did you think it’d be easy for me to pull through? 
Because it’s easy for you to start anew?
 
But I won’t wander with the clouds of Venus,
solitary and adrift ‘cause there’s no us.
Now I know you’re no longer my twin flame,
why should I remember your hateful name?
Today, tomorrow, it won’t all be the same,
colorless, meaningless, worthless,
just because you’re an iceberg...heartless!

On the ship of lost souls, I won’t be a prisoner…
for someday I’ll find love again with my true other.


04-28-2018

Contest:       Twin Flames
Sponsor:      Madison Demetros
Placement:   6th


Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/18/2018 10:46:00 PM
Sweet dear you have some emotional fingers. Your heart skips no beat to pen the details of feelings Like your write
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/19/2018 10:36:00 AM
Hi Al, I always appreciate your wonderful feedback and compliments. Thank you so very much! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/14/2018 10:52:00 PM
I'm just going to say it, Pandita.. I love the way you write. This poem is such a winner!!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/15/2018 8:03:00 AM
My friend, thank you for leaving me this lovely message. You brought some golden sunshine into my day! Have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/27/2018 11:16:00 AM
Lovely, Pandita. I love all the astrology dimension that adds depth to your poem. Congrats on your win.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/27/2018 10:30:00 PM
Hi Line, it is a pleasure to receive your kind complimentary words! Thank you so much for stopping by and reading this piece! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/22/2018 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations, emotional yet well structured and amazing.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/22/2018 12:28:00 PM
Hi Fauxcroft, thank you so much for reading this piece and for your lovely comments and compliments! Have a beautiful day, my friend. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 5/21/2018 9:00:00 PM
your connection and understanding of twin flame relationship was entruthed with your first line. Congratulations was my favourite
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/22/2018 12:26:00 PM
Hi Virginia, I am happy to hear from you! Thank you so much for your wonderful complimentary words! Hope you are enjoying a lovely day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/21/2018 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Twin Flame Contest with this powerful expression of loss. It brought up so much emotion in me, not from the loss of a twin but a close sibling. Well done!
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Date: 5/22/2018 11:16:00 AM
My Dear Susan, thank you for leaving me this lovely message. Please accept my greatest empathy for your loss which I can identify with as I too have lost a close sibling. With love, hugs, and blessings, Pandita
Date: 5/15/2018 5:21:00 PM
What do we do with our broken hearts? Very expertly rhymed, with deep communication of truths. What good are broken hearts? Poetry, Compassion as in service, especially medical, or education at many levels ... we must forgive him (her) and ourselves. I recall, "'tis better to have lost and lost, than not to have loved at all." But I digress ... why? Most important whys? get An Echo: "Wait. Love, love, love ... until it hurts." St. Theresa
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:08:00 AM
Hi Anil, I thank you for your continued support for my work! We shouldn't give up on love when it doesn't work out with one person; the real deal may right around the bend:-)! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/15/2018 3:58:00 PM
Pandora, Such a beautifully crafted sad write.. I think so many can relate to your words and the emotions of this skilled piece!
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:04:00 AM
Hi Chance, it is a pleasure to receive your kind complimentary words! Thank you so much for stopping by and reading this piece! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/30/2018 11:51:00 AM
Splendid melancholy poem of love loss and rugged determination of hope, Pandita. Heart moving prose. You express well the the death of love and the rebirth of hope. Your pen shines brightly as always. Love and smiles always.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/1/2018 3:05:00 PM
My friend, Freddie, I am so appreciative of your visit and your wonderful compliments and comments. Thank you for your welcomed continued support and encouragement! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/29/2018 12:34:00 PM
- This grabs me with mixed feeling (both good and sad), awesome written, Pandita - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 12:43:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you very much for your kind words and for reading and appreciating my work. Have a wonderful, relaxing Sunday, my friend. Hugs always. Pandita
Date: 4/29/2018 11:03:00 AM
You have poured a lot of beauty into the depth of your pain! A wonderful, well constructed poem.. A joy to read dear Pandita.. Keep inking beauty.
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Date: 4/29/2018 11:09:00 AM
Dear Besma, I am honoured by your visit! Thank you, my friend, for leaving your highly complimentary and encouraging words! Best regards and hugs!
Date: 4/29/2018 9:17:00 AM
This is a gorgeous piece. Thanks for your thoughtful visit and comment.
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Date: 4/29/2018 9:21:00 AM
Dear Richard, I am delighted to hear from you! Thank you so much for your wonderful complimentary words! Hope you are enjoying a lovely Sunday! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/29/2018 7:14:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this discourse of twin flames..excellent depiction as always .. probing questions makes one ponder..best for a win, Pandita.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 4/29/2018 8:24:00 AM
My friend Vijay, I truly appreciate your wonderful feedback and compliments for this piece. I always love hearing from you! Thank you! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/29/2018 5:15:00 AM
You have described disappointment, despair and depression so well in this line, Pandita: "Today, tomorrow would all be the same, colorless, meaningless, and I had no name." When you repeated it, you reinforced your own fantastic poem. I love this poem!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 4/29/2018 8:22:00 AM
Hi Caren, thank you so much for your lovely comments and compliments! I am happy you enjoyed my poem. Have a beautiful day my friend. Hugs and warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 4/28/2018 8:53:00 PM
Oh this was so good, I loved poems captivate the reader from start to end!!! Hugs!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 4/28/2018 9:03:00 PM
Dear Arthur, I am so delighted to hear from you! Thank you, my friend, for visiting and leaving your highly complimentary words! Best regards and hugs!
Date: 4/28/2018 6:28:00 PM
Oh... Wow! Pandita, hello. This poem is beautifully written. I like your two last lines in this poem. I have enjoyed the whole poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/29/2018 5:25:00 PM
Hugs always my friend. have a nice evening my friend. hugs. always.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 4/28/2018 6:36:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thank you very much for your kind words and for reading and appreciating my work. Have a wonderful, relaxing weekend, my friend. Hugs always. Pandita
Date: 4/28/2018 5:29:00 PM
I am applauding the artful love story of a broken youthful heart. Beautiful piece!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 4/28/2018 5:32:00 PM
Awwww! Thank you so much, Lovie, for your lovely comments and compliments that mean a lot to me! Have a beautiful day! Best wishes, my friend! Pandita