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When the Fire Burns Low

When the fire burns low and the embers flare out the cold and lonliness will creep in And the sorrow will begin The emptiness will find you there shivering The saddness will watch you withering when the fire burns low and the embers flare out You will be there alone without that special someone And the tears will come Utter saddness shall find your heart Your soul and spirit shall slip apart So when the fire burns low and the embers flare out I will be there But only because I care

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Date: 8/29/2011 6:52:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Ashley. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:06:00 PM
Creative, deep and meaningful expressions, ashley
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:05:00 PM
Ashley this poem is so beautiful and so meaningful, you truly captured the pain of sorrow and loneliness, this is exactly how I feel sometimes, well done, and thanks for viewing my poetry, I so appreciate that, and welcome to Poetrysoup, I hope you enjoy the journey~~
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