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When the Crystals of Time Dance

...There is a moment when the crystals of time dance with time 
Frothing tide pools diminutive wink 
Soldier helpless door closes on thin twine 
Night sea ease 
Night Sea 
Ease 
Night Sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/6/2009 4:25:00 AM
thank you sara/you are my most loyal commentator-i grew up by the sea and served in the merchant marine, best, tom
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Date: 11/6/2009 4:19:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. I especially like the second line. Keep writing. Sara
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