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For the Write Thirteen Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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"Spring being a tough act to follow, God created June." Al Bernstein June’s moon illumines with gold light in a sapphire sky. It’s as clear to me as a cloudless night summertime is nigh. Though still-cool primrose evenings linger on from spring, I listen for the sounds that warmer nights will bring: crickets’ chirruping, whippoorwills in leafy trees. Sing, oh lovely robin. Mockingbird, let me hear your charming croon. Common loon, may I slumber to your haunting tune? Sultry days mid-summer will be coaxing me to go on long mid-afternoon walks to a yellow-flowered meadow. Maybe I’ll go wading in cool water of a stream, then lie beneath a willow and drift into a dream. Fleeting is the sunny season; like my dreams, it too will end. Then I will be writing of the beauty fall shall send.

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Date: 4/26/2025 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "When Summer Comes Along" Great picture... Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 4/24/2025 7:58:00 PM
"Maybe I’ll go wading in cool water of a stream, then lie beneath a willow and drift into a dream." What a lovely experience it will be. Beautifully written, especially the birds' part. Congratulations, Andrea on your first place win.
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Date: 4/24/2025 5:33:00 PM
Oh look. First spot again in a Constance contest. You're racking up...
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Date: 4/24/2025 7:08:00 AM
How lyrical and musical is your beautiful words woven here in such a descriptive manner dear sweet andrea! I love every word in this! Its a new fave for men best wishes! I sent you a soupmail also! Sending you light
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Date: 4/24/2025 2:26:00 AM
Our relation with nature ! A very beautiful nature poem
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Date: 4/23/2025 9:28:00 PM
Enchanting final verse- <3 you captured Summer so beautifully
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Date: 4/23/2025 8:07:00 PM
Love the quote! 1st line… crickets’ chirruping, whippoorwills in leafy trees… Sultry days mid-summer will be coaxing me to go on long mid-afternoon walks to a yellow-flowered meadow...Love the final line…yes, spur on the seasons…Enjoy the arrival! Hugs
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Date: 4/23/2025 7:39:00 PM
So beautiful, Andrea:) serene writing:)
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