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When She Smiles

She is sweet as a jujube that one doling out Christmas cards by the ton Her colorful clothes are like banners and she reminds me of a sparkly elf Wearing cute bows in her hair she tells ding dong stories of old A jolly girl that is as bright as can be I love it when she sits by the Xmas tree I call her my doppelganger my mini-me her hair was once gold and now its gray of those lovely cards, she owns a stack! when she smiles she doesn't hold back.

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Date: 12/21/2024 11:23:00 PM
Hello Mystic :-) Nice poem! Have a nice season! Best wishes ~ AA
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/22/2024 2:44:00 AM
Thankyou for reading my poem dear poet, :)
Date: 12/21/2024 9:48:00 AM
Sweet Christmas poem.
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Date: 12/21/2024 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for reading it Jay, hope all is well,
Date: 12/21/2024 7:48:00 AM
My dear Mystic Rose, you are embracing Life and its bonds in so loving and enlivening way.. Christmas in the air! Human bonds will be celebrated.. Merry Christmas my dear Rose to you and to your loved ones, many years of bliss and blessings to come.. Stay always blessed and happy. Love and hugs
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2024 1:41:00 PM
I wrote it for the Bio contest Besma, it is me at a young age lol
Date: 12/21/2024 6:57:00 AM
so sweet and lovely, is this girl your daughter ? merry Christmas dear poet
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2024 1:40:00 PM
No its for a contest a bio one, thanks for reading
Date: 12/21/2024 6:11:00 AM
Thats very sweet.. A friend of your or are you looking in the mirror?
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Date: 12/21/2024 11:58:00 PM
Awwww
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2024 1:40:00 PM
lol it was for the Bio contest, and yes I used to be like that, when I was young. lol that was a long time ago when I was innocent and naive

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