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When She Said Goodbye

he tells her he loves her as he kicks her across the floor. she's lying there,curled up in a ball,wondering if this is all,she will ever deserve. she goes to the store,to buy the kids some milk and juice,but its no use,at the counter she realizes that her money is gone,he's out spending in on beer for all of his friends. when she gets home,she finds that he's not alone.theres a woman who says he's her man! she looks dazed,she's amazed at the events that came next. she went to the bedroom and picked up his gun. this girl thats never hurt no one. she took his life first,and then she looked the other woman right into her eyes,started to cry,put the gun to her own head,said goodbye...she died.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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