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When She Goes Away

A bright today, love came my way, and now we play in life’s array. We dance away in hope’s ballet, as love’s bouquet is here to stay. But then I say, I must delay; she might betray, a price to pay. Will love decay and my love stray, then go away to my dismay? Or will she stay till we are grey, and then death’s slay take her away? But either way I rue the day she goes away, and here I stay. October 6, 2018 Contest: Rhyme Battle XI Sponsor: Juli-Michelle

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/6/2018 10:39:00 PM

"She goes away, and here I stay" :) Of course you do. I think she just drifts in the wind, my friend. Congratulations, on this win. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 12/7/2018 4:19:00 AM

Thank you, Brandy.

Juli- Michelle

Date: 12/5/2018 6:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my Rhyme Battle contest!

John Gondolf
Date: 12/5/2018 6:33:00 PM

Thank you, Juli-Michelle, and thanks for hosting the contest. John

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/8/2018 3:31:00 PM

WoW! John, You did a wonderful job with this piece. Your rhymes and content are amazing. As far the " Rhyme" battle goes, I think you met the challenge my friend. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

John Gondolf
Date: 10/8/2018 5:00:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis, I'm glad you liked it. Monorhymes can sometimes be a bit boring. As far as the contest, my rhymes are not real creative but hopefully having three internal rhymes in each line will compensate. Thank you my friend. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/6/2018 6:51:00 PM

I like the way your thoughts caress the page. There are so many emotions tangling around each and every word. This is beautiful, tender and it touches the heart. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 10/6/2018 7:05:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many emotions surround me right now. John