When Savages Sang Strongly 3

Our oath is our soul keeping 
our joys are from smoking and drinking,
from the cannabis we cultivate a seeing
a laughter from the suffering 
a tear for the living memory
from the raw uncut winery 
We feel the flesh more keenly,
our trophies include skull cap revelry
imbibing the blessings of the enemy
from the roof of their mind's sanctuary 
a treasure merrily grisly,
the scalps of our competitors a salary
making for cloak and horse bridle history,
from the trauma we make victory,

From the trauma we make victory
we showed the world how to whip and ride
how to love liberty,
paper and stone do not decide
the way in which we remedy
iniquity, only in Truth do we confide,
as our kin conquered steadily
from Kushan to Hispania's Atlantic tide,
Rome relinquishing the keys to Destiny
from Atilla to Theodoric's tribe,
the nomadic warriors and traders remained free,
Visigoths vanished as their independence atrophied
the Ostrogoths succumbed to sedentary treachery,
our songs remain sung strongly,

Our songs remain sung strongly,
as Christ was cruxified
for crucibles carried by the Family
we gave sanctuary to many a preacher stigmatized,
Toaists tasted the terror of our primal domain
Buddhists bathed in butterflys' blood 
as the Jews jumped on the caravan coin,
Hindus knew Indra lived in the Aryan Hood
while the Nestorians never questioned our sin
and the shamans ate the shame of life,
Mohammad's ginger genetics made him kin
and his Jihad made us grin at the strife
his armies hired us and paid better than the Byzantine,
sometimes faith lives on the edge of a knife,

J.A.B.  2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/1/2025 10:56:00 AM
Justin, this saga burns like sacred smoke in a battlefield wind. You lace brutality with wisdom, and myth with marrow. “From the trauma we make victory”--that line alone could be carved in stone. The thread of faith running through the final stanza is masterfully raw, showing reverence and rebellion intertwined. This isn’t just verse--it’s blood memory. Your poetry sings with the roar of ancestors and the hush of unburied truth. Deepest respect, Alesia
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/6/2025 4:45:00 PM
Your affection is fuel for life Alesia...sweet...J.A.B.
Date: 1/2/2021 5:16:00 AM
"From the trauma we make victory"..glorious line..and the last line very thought-provoking...always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/2/2021 5:55:00 PM
I knew you'd feel the strength of this piece Poetess...the will to survive, and to flourish...J.A.B.
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