When Savages Sang Strongly 1

The leopard kills for love
sun burns for souls,
the moon moans for blood
stars frost the steppes,
the fire of your eyes
warms the wastelands,
alone the horse rides
Tree of Life leans to the winds,
the arrow strikes deep
a wound becomes wise,
the griffin sees you sleep
in this dream somebody dies,
lightning hesitates for your heartbeat
the storm doesn't stop for sympathies,

The storm doesn't stop for sympathies 
pick up your head and move towards Truth,
permafrost phantoms play for promises
amid the hills of hero's, ancestor's proof,
Kurgan Tombs keeping treasures young 
from the Northern Lights to the Pontic Plains,
memories of millenia the Scythians have sung
from Hyperborea to the Pyramids, 
with bow and battle axe liberty was earned
empires paid tribute to their valor,
they were the Masters of Eurasia's fortune
their spirit will always seek a new frontier,
the world pulled them away with a modern dawn
only the sun knows where to find the future,

Only the sun knows where to find the future
only the future knows where to find hope's clarity,
We embrace the song of the suffering vulture
rely not on the feed of death's charity,
We venture through the danger
exposed to the ancient elements,
predators prowl with patient hunger
We are prepared to wear the weapons,
Colonizing the wilderness with wisdom
We bring industry and culture,
there is a dance we call the Soul Storm
in which the falcon rides karma's fire,
when the Devil blows war's iron horn
destiny demands that we be the debtor,

J.A.B.  2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 3:34 AM
“ The storm doesn't stop for sympathies pick up your head and move towards Truth” can we print this on a tshirt? Honestly? Wow! Every line in this sings wisdom and the philosophical manner youve phrased them all is soulfully moving! And can I point out how unique your rhymes are! Not the mainstream bla bla! You stand out! You are extraordinary! Pleasure reading you today Sending you warm light always
Bordner Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 1:08 PM
You and I are radical flames of Poetry...
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August 29, 2026 at 3:32 AM
If words could make one weep! Yours would! I love your intelligence and creative skills! Altho I closed my eyes to certain things 🥹😂 “ there is a dance we call the Soul Storm in which the falcon rides karma's fire, when the Devil blows war's iron horn destiny demands that we be the debtor,” what are you? Gosh!!!!! I wish I can fave this ten times! I will still not be satisfied! Cus this sheer brilliance at its finest! Your quill just awakens my senses! I am proud of you Poet man!
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August 31, 2026 at 1:01 PM
I love the way you feel my soul poetry Poetess! To be the kiss that wakes your soul is divine purpose...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 3:29 AM
Ah I am in awe of how your words just unfold, this is another one of your most exquisite poems dear Justin, crown of sonnets! Hmm I am attracted to your tone of speech! Its so beautiful and unique! I especially love the opening lines as I think of my beloved “ the moon moans for blood stars frost the steppes, the fire of your eyes” ah!!! How fitting is it for now? Tell me I am right? “ only the future knows where to find hope's clarity, We embrace the song of the suffering vulture” the wisdom!
Bordner Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 12:56 PM
I understand your attraction to the blood essence Potess. You are right, love must be fed now. Thank you for highlighting my favorite feelings in this poem...J.A.B.
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April 26, 2025 at 3:01 PM
"This is absolutely incredible, J.A.B. -- a fierce, sweeping epic of history, spirit, and survival. Your words carry the power of a thousand ancient songs, reminding us of the wild heart that refuses to be broken. Brilliant and unforgettable."
Bordner Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 3:26 PM
I like to know my songs swim over your fine senses like a silken breeze of warm electric spirit Poetess...Justin
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January 25, 2021 at 5:55 AM
WoW! Justin, You have composed a well-written write with much depth and content. I’ll to reread this to get a deeper understanding. I hope your New Year is going well thus far:-) Alexis
Bordner Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 7:56 PM
Your breath is is beautifully honest upon my body of work Poetess...Justin
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January 2, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Happy New Year, dear Justin, sending you warm regards and so much love...I can't wait to dive deep with you and this amazing composition...a magnificent start indeed - and I am excited to see what inspires you in this new year. This is such a wonderful form of poetry and you craft so well. Always, Laura
Bordner Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 4:38 PM
You're a hot inspiration right now Poetess...J.A.B.
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January 1, 2021 at 9:51 AM
A poetry of a wealthy soul whose mind soaring unchained by shallow thoughts and feelings.. the wild and the stormy side of Nature and human nature your path towards insight, gain, valour, Truth.. So different the taste of your poetry, Justin! A great pleasure to read such a depth! Nice to see you again! Happy New Year! My deepest regards and blessings.
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January 1, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Thank you sweet Besma...I love your freshness!...Happy New Year!...Justin
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