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When Poetry Is Art

When reading poetry, I like to see clear imagery! I don’t like things obscure, for if a poem lacks lucidity, it’s like I take my glasses off; words blur! I’m no good at puzzles; I want to know the poet’s message! Oh, my mind will drift if all I see are words like whirling snow! My spirit does not often need a lift. Good poetry can be both dark or light. But most of all, I like it when it’s smart! The use of metaphors and words not trite - poetic craftsmanship. . . now that is art! Smooth-flowing – whether it’s free verse or rhyme - is poetry to which I’ll give my time! Dec. 13, 2019 for Line Gauthier's 'Fave' Contest

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Date: 1/1/2020 3:43:00 AM
Thank you for embodying the enjambment principle, and for delicious words like lucidity. I'm with you on this - my favorite poems are the ones that tone down the $100 words and mythological references and allusions to Greek philosophers and ancient British history and give the intelligent modern reader a fighting chance to know what is being communicated. Preach! Great sonnet, Andrea. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 12/28/2019 6:00:00 PM
When poetry is art, it paints a picture that the soul can interpret and conceive it's beauty in each individuals own perception. I hope my comment is not too puzzling. <3 :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/29/2019 10:00:00 AM
of course your comment is not puzzling. You are clear to me, just like in your poetry, my friend.
Date: 12/28/2019 2:00:00 AM
Andrea poetry is art and this is gorgeous! Congrats on your HN!;)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/29/2019 10:00:00 AM
thanks so much, Brenda.
Date: 12/26/2019 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Great job......
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Date: 12/18/2019 2:26:00 PM
I like what you said and make sure I don't try any poetic tricks, not that I have. I like you, I write what I feel. Nicely done. and congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/18/2019 7:43:00 AM
A lovely vibe of sincerity to this...Congratulations Andrea on POTD
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Date: 12/17/2019 2:52:00 PM
Sometimes ideas take a bit to dawn on me // but here's to clear-headed lucidtiy! Congrats, Andrea, on POTD. Season's Happiness, Gershon
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Date: 12/16/2019 7:14:00 PM
How wonderful to see that this is POTD Andrea! You speak for most of us here. Congratulations my friend! Congratulations on your top winning placement as well. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo
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Date: 12/16/2019 4:14:00 PM
I like this poem, Andrea, a novel use of the sonnet from.
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Date: 12/16/2019 5:25:00 AM
Hi Jacob, Well congrats to you and Mom. This is adorable. I see that you love your nieces very much. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. Happy Holidays to you and your family and friends- Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/16/2019 2:47:00 PM
Hey, I think you mixed me up with someone else! Thanks anyway though, Alexis.
Date: 12/16/2019 3:42:00 AM
I`m back to say Congrats on POTD Andrea. Well done. oops I allready said congrats lol.
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Date: 12/16/2019 12:48:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem :)~ Andrea
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Date: 12/16/2019 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. I totally agree.
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Date: 12/15/2019 9:02:00 PM
great write...congratulations on your potd... hugs
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Date: 12/15/2019 6:51:00 PM
Poetry- it's like reading a book. If you just quickly glance or skim over the words. It will leave you feeling empty. Ahhh, yes- something is missing. As every moment matters. Every emotion. "Poetry is Art" I completely agree. And from the heart. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. :) Ohhh, I like Puzzles. Figuring things out. :) Brandy
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Date: 12/15/2019 5:15:00 PM
I`m back to say congrats on getting POTD Andrea
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Date: 12/15/2019 12:48:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/15/2019 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on POTD with your awesome poem and I like the same type of poems!
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Date: 12/15/2019 12:12:00 PM
I like the smooth flowing like you Andrea but to the contrary I enjoy multiple layers and solving riddles/puzzles.
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Date: 12/15/2019 9:06:00 AM
Nicely done, Andrea, explains it all.. congratulations on POTD. and good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 12/15/2019 8:14:00 AM
Andrea, I totally agree with your sentiments on the type of poetry I prefer to read, I tend to shy away from reading a poet if I can never understand what it is they are saying. Congrats on POTD. John
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Date: 12/15/2019 8:14:00 AM
I can totally relate to this. Thems be the ones I faves too ;), Congrats on POTD Andrea! xomo
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:57:00 AM
So well spoken, Andrea, poetry is an ART form with many tones and colours new and for this fine piece congrats to you. You've identified all the aspects of good writing.
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:44:00 AM
I like a poem that flows well, Congrats on POTD Andrea..
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:36:00 AM
Shared sentiments, AD. Tho' a lot of people don't really like plain truth delivered up side their head, a straight right cross to the Temple. But I do get your drift. Kudos on POTD. Magnifique poetry! Love and more love always.
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