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Heavenly bodies explode, scattering fragments past the glowing moon. 3-28-19 Monoku Pick A Picture What Cha See #2 Contest picture #1 Sponsor: James Edward Lee Sr.

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Date: 4/11/2019 7:15:00 AM
Great imagery. I can see it vividly.
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Date: 4/4/2019 5:08:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Joseph...a truly deserved high flying win. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/4/2019 6:30:00 AM
I have read your creative Monoku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 4/2/2019 1:44:00 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/2/2019 12:44:00 PM
Hi Joseph congratulations on your fine win. Hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 4/2/2019 2:10:00 AM
Back with congrats Joseph. Tom
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Date: 4/1/2019 10:21:00 PM
Lovely, Joseph. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/1/2019 9:39:00 PM
Your thoughts take my breath away. I knew this was a winner the moment I read it. Congratulations Joseph!! :) Brandy
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Date: 4/1/2019 7:33:00 PM
yep I remember this stellar one!! BAck with Congrats!!
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Date: 4/1/2019 1:46:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful win, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2019 7:51:00 PM
good one. I must not have been wearing my glasses the other day when I saw the pictures at his contest page . I can see more clearly now what that is a picture of that you wrote about.
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Date: 3/30/2019 1:16:00 PM
Damn.. powerful imagery in one line..
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Date: 3/29/2019 11:18:00 AM
Lovely..,
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Date: 3/28/2019 9:11:00 PM
Such a magical moment! The romantic in me, softly sighs. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy
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Date: 3/28/2019 5:15:00 PM
Even the moon must have enjoyed this 'explosive' image, Joseph! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/28/2019 4:48:00 PM
so much mystery beyond our milky way, joseph..may this collision bring good omen...huggs and thanks for your wonderful , recent challenge!..huggs
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Date: 3/28/2019 3:00:00 PM
That photo says it all..well captured in your poem, Joseph.
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Date: 3/28/2019 2:36:00 PM
- The big explosion - Great written, Joseph - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/28/2019 1:59:00 PM
Well described Joseph in a few words. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 3/28/2019 12:55:00 PM
Great image, but frightening.... Hugs
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Date: 3/28/2019 12:49:00 PM
a lovely interpretation of the image Joseph, so few words paint a fabulous picture:-) hugs jan xx
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