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When Planets Collide

Heavenly bodies explode, scattering fragments past the glowing moon.

 3-28-19
 Monoku Pick A Picture What Cha See #2 Contest
 picture #1
 Sponsor: James Edward Lee Sr.
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Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Great imagery. I can see it vividly.
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 5:08 PM
Back with congratulations, Joseph...a truly deserved high flying win. Regards // paul
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 6:30 AM
I have read your creative Monoku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Roper Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 1:44 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Proxenos Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Hi Joseph congratulations on your fine win. Hugs Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 2:10 AM
Back with congrats Joseph. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 10:21 PM
Lovely, Joseph. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Nicole Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 9:39 PM
Your thoughts take my breath away. I knew this was a winner the moment I read it. Congratulations Joseph!! :) Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 7:33 PM
yep I remember this stellar one!! BAck with Congrats!!
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:46 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful win, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 7:51 PM
good one. I must not have been wearing my glasses the other day when I saw the pictures at his contest page . I can see more clearly now what that is a picture of that you wrote about.
One Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 1:16 PM
Damn.. powerful imagery in one line..
Thayer Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 11:18 AM
Lovely..,
Nicole Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Such a magical moment! The romantic in me, softly sighs. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy
Callus Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Even the moon must have enjoyed this 'explosive' image, Joseph! Regards // paul
Onclaud Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 4:48 PM
so much mystery beyond our milky way, joseph..may this collision bring good omen...huggs and thanks for your wonderful , recent challenge!..huggs
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 3:00 PM
That photo says it all..well captured in your poem, Joseph.
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 2:36 PM
- The big explosion - Great written, Joseph - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Well described Joseph in a few words. Good luck. Tom.
Roper Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 12:55 PM
Great image, but frightening.... Hugs
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 12:49 PM
a lovely interpretation of the image Joseph, so few words paint a fabulous picture:-) hugs jan xx
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