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When Pillars Fail

When pillars fail
   When walls break
My angel can bear
   The unknown weight.

If darkness prevails
   He comes striving
To lead me down trails
   I've never been.

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Janine Lever

Date: 1/15/2024 3:38:00 PM

Hello amy, your lines 'to lead me down trails i've never been' are so profound, showing the depth of faith and hope. I enjoyed your poem very much. love and peace xxjanine

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/15/2024 2:51:00 PM

We have to have faith and honor to continue even when our immediate concerns go unresolved. You put this so well. Congratulations on being featured. Very cool.

Jake Werner

Date: 1/15/2024 2:09:00 PM

I’m a fan. You write beautifully

Amy Michelle Mosier
Date: 1/16/2024 3:46:00 PM

Thank you so much!