When Pillars Fail

When pillars fail
   When walls break
My angel can bear
   The unknown weight.

If darkness prevails
   He comes striving
To lead me down trails
   I've never been.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lever Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 3:38 PM
Hello amy, your lines 'to lead me down trails i've never been' are so profound, showing the depth of faith and hope. I enjoyed your poem very much. love and peace xxjanine
Beaufort Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 2:51 PM
We have to have faith and honor to continue even when our immediate concerns go unresolved. You put this so well. Congratulations on being featured. Very cool.
Werner Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 2:09 PM
I’m a fan. You write beautifully
Mosier Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 3:46 PM
Thank you so much!
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