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When Past and Present Intersect

Some find the present holds no happiness. Cocooned in memories of glory days, they spin embellished views of each success and leave bad times to vanish in the haze. Some lend the past no power in their lives. They learn no lessons from mistakes they’ve made. If unacknowledged past with present strives, will those same issues future peace degrade? But wise ones know that when past intersects with present, smiles will alternate with tears. They realize growth comes when one reflects on all life’s heights and depths, its joys and fears. The voices from our past should not be quelled; life makes more sense when old and new we meld. May 2, 2021 All Yours (May 3) contest NA May 4, 2021 Contest: Final 2021 NA Choice 3 Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 5/4/2021 4:59:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sometimes old and new meld and sometimes not. Wisdom is to know the difference. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/5/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Date: 5/2/2021 12:57:00 PM
it's such a pleasure to read a poem that has so much wisdom AND perfect rhyme and rhythm! bravo for this one, janice...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/5/2021 3:27:00 PM
Ilene, thanks a million! Janice
Date: 5/2/2021 12:19:00 PM
A wonderful sonnet Janice. You know what they say, wisdom comes with age. I believe that applies to your sonnet. When we are young we are looking toward the future. As we age we begin to start looking back because there is no better teacher than experience. Good luck Janice. Hope your day is not rained out like mine is:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/5/2021 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Danny. We're alternating between stormy and gorgeous weather! Janice
Date: 5/2/2021 11:56:00 AM
Wonderful entry. All my best wishes for your win. God bless you and sending love and prayers, Gina
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/2/2021 12:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gina. Janice
Date: 5/2/2021 11:49:00 AM
Clever choice of words! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/2/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice

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