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When Passion Overwhelms

When Passion overwhelms Passion my weakness that tends to overpower, as if I am living only to nurture love and hover? Logical thoughts beating and buzzing in head, my biggest strength, words are better unsaid ! Heart full of love pumps into my farthest cell, yearnings sizzling hot that refuse a tranquil. Tears from starry eyes slip like quicksilver, life nearing end, gloom and sorrow shimmer! Wake up, can't let my being vanish in vain, betrayed love why am I craving to attain ? Unaccomplished, Unacknowledged, Unsought, can't let suffocate and blot out my thought. Love be soft as feathers, mind strong as reins, my strength my ideas, firmer than any chains. Sprout and grow fast and tempestuously, making me stand venerable conspicuously ! Written November 7th, 2014 For contest by Verlena S. Walker Awarded HM

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Date: 11/13/2014 6:13:00 AM
Congrats on the win though deserved higher place
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Date: 11/10/2014 4:47:00 PM
"can't let suffocate and blot out my thought" my strength my ideas, firmer than any chains Both very wise thoughts. A very deep poem Dr. Sharma, showing your strength of how to overcome your weaknesses. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/10/2014 3:49:00 PM
beautifully passionate Dr Sharma - many congrats on your HM:-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:00:00 AM
very passionate poem Upma a 7 from me
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/8/2014 4:14:00 AM
Thnx Jasmine for ur kind words my new friend! Appreciate ur visit !
Date: 11/8/2014 3:26:00 AM
In this poem passion is definetely your power sweet lady.I do understand when one loves passionately..One can easily get hurt..But passion is still worth to taste in the end.Our weakness is our strength many a time.A lovely poem.So glad I stopped to read it dear.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/8/2014 3:36:00 AM
Thank you sweetie for ur lovely words! Appreciate ur kind visit!
Date: 11/7/2014 7:46:00 AM
- True love is strong and becomes even stronger with time - a deep and very well written poem Dr. Upma - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2014 3:38:00 AM
Thnx for ur visit n kind words Anne Lise!

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