When Older Siblings Or Younger Step In Love

It was her sixteenth birth year...
She was madly in love with an elderly goon
I forbade her to step forward
She denied being backward.

Yelling at me, she insulted me in all possible ways,
My poor little angel, my lovely sweet sissy,
I saw her, drowning to dark hole bit by bit
I smelled danger, as if, it was like-
A raven rushing at her……
To suck her blood to the death
She wanted to taste all the way life
But it was too wild, the moron was devilish
He had his own wife with three kids!
I warned again my sweet little sis,
‘Don’t love’! She never looked back and drowned;
Continued sipping the nasty blood and blood sucked her
Until the raven attempted to kill her
She fled then, emptied, broken hearted.

Written by-Tasmina Hayat Khan
9th January 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 7, 2016 at 9:31 AM
thanks for the nice reply
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February 7, 2016 at 1:29 AM
TASMINA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Khan Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Linda, loving your inspiration...
Khan Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:10 AM
Subjective indeed
Khan Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Thanks for your time for my poem...
A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:02 PM
TASMINA, Congratulations on your awesome sibling win. XOX - LINDA -
Khan Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Thanks ..
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January 18, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Tasmina, Congratulations on your lovely win. Love the subject..... SKAT **
Khan Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 10:03 PM
Thanks dear SKAT for your read..
Roper Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Tasmina , congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step In”... contest. You were such a good sister to your sister, sometimes we are blind to evil because it taste so good so we cannot see what others see. Hugs
Khan Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Thanks Eve, for ur thoughtful comment..
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Oh Tasmina this is such a sad poem am so glad you stepped in and tried to advise her although at the time I'm sure she didn't appreciate it:-) hugs Jan xx
Khan Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Thanks Jan for your comment.
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