When Old Folks Gits Together

Wherever they gather, on the porch or nigh a glowin' flame,
The conversation of older folks is just about the same.
Invariably, they'll discuss their aches, pains and weather,
Anytime two or more of them chance to git together!

Oh, they may git around to addressin' crops and the lack of rain,
Or discuss politics and religion or somethin' along that vein.
Perhaps they'll grouch about taxes or politicians' inane blather,
Or talk about their aches, pains and weather when they gits together!

The healing powers of fish oil with omega three they might compare,
Or the behavior of kids nowadays, "its a sight", they do declare,
Wonderin' why folks don't rein 'em in and keep 'em on a tether.
And they'll talk aches, pains and weather when they gits together!

Older folks may reminisce about the simpler days of yore,
And the flagrant lack of respect and courtesy anymore,
Or they may opt to sit in stoic silence or elect whether,
To discuss their aches, pains and weather when they gits together!

When a clutch of older folks gits together to shoot the breeze,
They've earned the right to talk about anything they please!
But you'll likely find that they chat about their aches, pains and weather,
Most everytime several of them choose to git together!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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March 28, 2012 at 4:14 PM
Hi Bob, What a wonderful poem! I can see myself in this group of old folks talking about my aches and pains. I like your style! By the way, thank you so much for your lovely comment on my poem, and thank you for the welcome! :)
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March 28, 2012 at 9:06 AM
so enjoyable.. and how ironidc my doc just put me on fish oil and omega vitamins Bob.. guess I better git my dhair ready and join the porch people luv.. glad u are being informed with fire status... it was so sad hearing about this on TV and how stunned everyone was blaming Jefferson tny. for starting it all.. take dare my friend..luv..
Nair Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 6:16 PM
This one again is such a well-written piece ..enjoyed, jag
Onclaud Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 1:56 PM
hahaha, my father used to say that after 50, the topics are always about memories, aches, unfulfilled dreams ,and a dislike for noisy music... grreeaat way to expresss this moment with such wit,bob.. :) huggs!
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 1:11 PM
Hi Bob. I always look forward to read your poems.You do it again and again...and you are a brilliant poet...so well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
Merryman Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 10:17 AM
An entertaining piece, Bob, and so very true. Enjoyed this. Love, Kim
Guzzi Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:29 AM
AMEN!!! [Have you seen the movie Avalon..you'd love it try the library it's an old one!] Thanks for stopping by my writes! Light & Love [ps I'm sending this poem to my Dad!]
Bauer Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:28 AM
ah, so true and so delightfully expressed! i always look forward to reading whatever poem has your name attached to it. it's a pleasure to "git together" with you!
Phookan Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:01 AM
Very charming, I've always seen you doing superb job with refrains, nobody puts them so nicely together. Pleasure to read this piece of work today, regards, gautami
Dey Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 7:36 AM
Nicely written, love this and write on please.
Culverhouse Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 3:16 AM
enjoyed reading your work this early morn....
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 10:54 PM
Wow, if this isn't the truth! I worked with the senior population for years and boy did I hear a lot of aches, pains, and weather. But most of the time, if given the chance, they have much more to say and I learned plenty. Thanks for sharing tonight. You always get me laughing, thinking or both. Blessings, Rhonda
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 9:37 PM
Uhh Guh Reminds me of my hubby. Great job here/. God |Bless, JB
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