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When My Mind Is Sad

"The bubbling brook doth leap when I come by, Because my feet find measure with its call ..." Jones Very, 1823-1880 _____________________ The hidden birds sing me a song as a rippling stream hums with winds strong and swaying flowers seem to know my hand sighing- as I stop to caress their beauty grand and yellow bees buzz and butterflies are adrift and pretty hummingbirds flutter and spin swift oh, when my mind is sad- my steps seek peace so in green I meander till sad thoughts I release __________________ August 13, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/when my mind is sad Copyright Protected, ID 08-1380-778-13 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Brian Strand Rhyme Me sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/14/2021 First Place

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Date: 8/13/2021 7:33:00 PM
Starts with concern and ends with peace/ I love it. Very well put together.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2021 8:28:00 AM
Barbara, thank you so much for the comment and compliment ~ Constance
Date: 8/13/2021 3:19:00 PM
Enjoyed this beautiful poem, Constance, amid birdsongs-- and rippling stream--- and butterflies adrift.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/13/2021 5:23:00 PM
Vijay, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance

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