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When My Love Arises

A sea of blue is in his eyes - a sea of blue and azure skies! His lips are berries red and sweet, and in his hair’s a field of wheat upon the pillow where he lies. Written June 20, 2015 For the 5 Lines Metaphor and Similie Contest of Sara Kendrick

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Date: 7/2/2015 2:26:00 AM
Indeed this is excellent, Andrea! And thank the good Lord - Not a lobster in sight! My very best regards! :) john. P.s A worthy 7!
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:48:00 PM
Andrea Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:14:00 PM
Circling back for another enjoyable read and to congratulate you on this wonderful win! Pandita
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Date: 6/29/2015 6:36:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/29/2015 5:58:00 PM
Congratulations....That's a WOW WOW
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Date: 6/29/2015 5:34:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive win..Way to go..Congrats..Thanks for your participation in my contest..Sara
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Date: 6/28/2015 4:34:00 PM
We hope he didn't leave the field on the pillow after he got up! But anyway, you have a tender heart and from what I understand, you are one of the few (like me) who have had a long and happy marriage. We are indeed lucky, hard working, willing to overlook things and willing to compromise.
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Date: 6/28/2015 9:41:00 AM
So beautiful poem in five lines my very dear friend, Andrea. I'm so grateful to read it tonight. I like it so much. I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Thanks a lot for sharing. Thanks a lot as well for reading my simple poem Mehndi. So sorry for the late reply cuz I got flu this past week due to extreme heat here in BKK i think. Was next to some of my pupils. But now getting better. Once again thanks a lot for this poem. Have a great wkend! Many lovely hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/26/2015 9:45:00 PM
This is very beautiful, I might add the title sure caught my eye, something I may have said at certain times!!!! :)
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Date: 6/26/2015 3:32:00 PM
Andrea, a truly lovely poem for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Haiku 9
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Date: 6/26/2015 2:32:00 PM
This is really beautiful! I love it! Pandita
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Date: 6/26/2015 1:26:00 PM
Very romantic poem :)
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Date: 6/26/2015 11:18:00 AM
This is perfect, Andrea. Whoever invented the form had just such a poem in mind. Love, daver
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Date: 6/26/2015 2:02:00 AM
This made smile because I have the feeling you could have written way more than 5 lines on the subject. GL Jan
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Date: 6/25/2015 9:47:00 PM
Sweet, sweet lines of metaphors for him. Good luck for the contest, Andie!
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Date: 6/25/2015 8:57:00 PM
Nice picture of a lover! I hope your in laws are O.K,! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/25/2015 6:46:00 PM
nice metaphors - gl in contest Ron
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Date: 6/25/2015 5:23:00 PM
A lovely form to describe your love.
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Date: 6/25/2015 4:16:00 PM
I downloaded Ad Block Plus on my laptop and 95% of the ads have disappeared....beautiful picture you paint looking at the one you love deep in sleep.
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