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When Moonbeams Dance

On a night when moonbeams dance And stars shine in the sky, 'Tis a night meant for romance Just made for you and I. Come let us sit beneath the stars And whisper words of love, Hand in hand, we'll gaze upon The heavens, up above.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/17/2017 9:50:00 AM

Simple and beautiful, as love should be!

Gary Smith
Date: 10/17/2017 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2017 5:56:00 PM

So sweet and lyrical, Gary. Good luck in the contest.

Gary Smith
Date: 10/14/2017 6:16:00 PM

Thank you Andrea :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2017 1:39:00 PM

what a gorgeous rhyme Gary, we are very lucky here as we have very little light pollution here and the skies can be very clear:-) hugs jan xx

Gary Smith
Date: 10/14/2017 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Jan :)