When Message of Hearts Blew In Prairies

First time our eyes met, instantly I knew
Why red rose-buds are boasting a bloom
In fragrance of gardenia passing through
As scent of pink lilies meant only for you
Evoked conversation of romance for two.

When message of hearts blew in prairies
Words of desire carried a lyrical promise
Blowing in the winds melody of our music
Composing a song in harmony of dreams
Wooing you to declare, for you I'm falling.

I've heard about the allure you're feeling
For you speak to me as I'm daydreaming
Holding me captive, keeping me company,
Praising your name every thought's saying
It won't be long before you would own me.

Unknowingly I introduced you to my family
When in my sleep I spoke of you so fondly.
You must've heard the joy of their cheers
For I see you smiling, shedding happy tears--
As consent of your heart echoes in my ears.

April 2, 2019
Placed 3rd: Strand choice O contest by Brian Strand
I'm crushing on you poetry contest
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/13/2020 3:12:00 PM
Very romantic, Vijay :)
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Date: 3/24/2020 5:21:00 PM
Vijay I have missed reading you! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 3/24/2020 2:30:00 PM
You just have such a wonderful ability to write romantic poetry! Congratulations, Vijay.
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Date: 3/24/2020 12:35:00 PM
Stellar write, Vijay:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/9/2019 8:31:00 PM
Your words shine!! Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy
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Date: 5/5/2019 10:11:00 AM
Lovely Vijay. Who could resist such sweet sentiments. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/28/2019 6:03:00 AM
You captured the joy of new love. This is beautiful. I especially like, “Unknowingly I introduced you to my family When in my sleep I spoke of you so fondly.”. Bravo
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Date: 4/17/2019 11:50:00 PM
Yes, the wind knows many secrets. Moments of the heart. Congratulations Vijay. It is nice seeing this poem on the list of best poems. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:10:00 AM
Much appreciate your return visit Brandy...many thanks. Yes--it is nice to see it on the best poem chart.
Date: 4/17/2019 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful words of love to one you hold dear. Very disarming. This would make a wonderful valentine. Love it. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:08:00 AM
Much appreciate the kind remarks Judy..many thanks.
Date: 4/15/2019 4:54:00 AM
Your poem is magic! Having the enlivening scent and inspiring passion of spring! A sweet blossoming love in an exquisite poem! A great pleasure to enjoy your poetry dear Vijay.. a win for me and in my fave list. My deepest regards and blessings. Merry Spring!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:08:00 AM
I feel rewarded by your feedback..much appreciate Besma. Special thanks for the FAVE. Regards.
Date: 4/11/2019 11:31:00 AM
Hello Vijay Pandit, you listed this poem as a verse, I read this poem as romance. I can feel the love in this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:07:00 AM
Much appreciate the kind feedback Darlene..many thanks.
Date: 4/10/2019 3:48:00 PM
Love is such a beautiful thing Vjay and you bring it to life here on this page full of sincerity and vibrancy! Kudos to you my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:06:00 AM
Much appreciate Kyle..many thanks for the kind remarks.
Date: 4/10/2019 6:39:00 AM
Excellent. Sound very romantic. Happy ending my friend.
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Date: 4/26/2019 11:05:00 AM
Many thanks Ravi..much appreciate.
Date: 4/9/2019 9:12:00 AM
I see you haven't lost your magical flare Vijay...excellent entry my friend...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 4/26/2019 11:05:00 AM
Thank you WW..much appreciate.
Date: 4/8/2019 6:05:00 AM
VJ So original and So Smack Down Good! The last line pinned me for the full three count! The V.J. Crush is a lethal poetic move!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:04:00 AM
Much appreciate Chuck..many thanks.
Date: 4/6/2019 3:18:00 PM
I love the lines 'You must've heard the joy of cheers, For I see you smiling, shedding happy tears" How proud you must have felt! This poem is one of real and radiant love! - Good luck in the contest Vijay! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2019 4:01:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your generous feedback Jennifer..much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 4/6/2019 2:25:00 PM
A beautifully written poem. Excellent 1st stanza! and I also love the line ...When message of hearts blew in prairies. I enjoyed this Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2019 4:00:00 PM
Much appreciate Heidi..so glad to read your feedback..many thanks as always.
Date: 4/6/2019 12:47:00 PM
looking forward to your next piece after your vacay, vijay!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2019 3:59:00 PM
Thanks Nette..appreciate the visit and comments.
Date: 4/6/2019 7:45:00 AM
Love smiles like a cute baby in your poems.. well written :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2019 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Swetha..appreciate the kind feedback.
Date: 4/5/2019 9:35:00 AM
Your joy shines Vijay, well done my friend...
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Date: 4/5/2019 2:10:00 PM
Much appreciate Charlie..many thanks.
Date: 4/5/2019 9:19:00 AM
Perfect romantic and written verse, Vijay. Good luck in the contest. Have a nice weekend. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/5/2019 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Eve..much appreciate the kind words.
Date: 4/5/2019 7:01:00 AM
So beautiful, Vijay. Such a cute one. Reads like a winner .
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/5/2019 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.
Date: 4/5/2019 4:21:00 AM
- A poem that sings of love, Vijay :) - Beautifully written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/5/2019 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate...many many thanks.
Date: 4/4/2019 11:34:00 AM
Definitely a big crush, Vijay! The start of a long romantic relationship. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/5/2019 7:51:00 AM
Much appreciate Paul..many thanks. Regards.
Date: 4/4/2019 10:46:00 AM
The early magic of a new love expressed in the most radiant and evocative terms.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/5/2019 7:50:00 AM
You are so kind my friend..much appreciate..many thanks.
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