Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

When Message of Hearts Blew In Prairies

First time our eyes met, instantly I knew
Why red rose-buds are boasting a bloom
In fragrance of gardenia passing through
As scent of pink lilies meant only for you
Evoked conversation of romance for two.

When message of hearts blew in prairies
Words of desire carried a lyrical promise
Blowing in the winds melody of our music
Composing a song in harmony of dreams
Wooing you to declare, for you I'm falling.

I've heard about the allure you're feeling
For you speak to me as I'm daydreaming
Holding me captive, keeping me company,
Praising your name every thought's saying
It won't be long before you would own me.

Unknowingly I introduced you to my family
When in my sleep I spoke of you so fondly.
You must've heard the joy of their cheers
For I see you smiling, shedding happy tears--
As consent of your heart echoes in my ears.

April 2, 2019
Placed 3rd: Strand choice O contest by Brian Strand
I'm crushing on you poetry contest
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Angela Crabtree December 13, 2020 at 3:12 PM Very romantic, Vijay :)

Brenda Chiri March 24, 2020 at 5:21 PM Vijay I have missed reading you! Congrats on your win!;)

Sam Kauffman March 24, 2020 at 2:30 PM You just have such a wonderful ability to write romantic poetry! Congratulations, Vijay.

Edward Ibeh March 24, 2020 at 12:35 PM Stellar write, Vijay:-) Congratulations on your win!

Brandy Nicole May 9, 2019 at 8:31 PM Your words shine!! Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Judy Ball May 5, 2019 at 10:11 AM Lovely Vijay. Who could resist such sweet sentiments. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

P.S. Awtry April 28, 2019 at 6:03 AM You captured the joy of new love. This is beautiful. I especially like, “Unknowingly I introduced you to my family When in my sleep I spoke of you so fondly.”. Bravo

Brandy Nicole April 17, 2019 at 11:50 PM Yes, the wind knows many secrets. Moments of the heart. Congratulations Vijay. It is nice seeing this poem on the list of best poems. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit April 26, 2019 at 11:10 AM Much appreciate your return visit Brandy...many thanks. Yes--it is nice to see it on the best poem chart.

Judy Ball April 17, 2019 at 4:03 PM Beautiful words of love to one you hold dear. Very disarming. This would make a wonderful valentine. Love it. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours, JB Vijay Pandit April 26, 2019 at 11:08 AM Much appreciate the kind remarks Judy..many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri April 15, 2019 at 4:54 AM Your poem is magic! Having the enlivening scent and inspiring passion of spring! A sweet blossoming love in an exquisite poem! A great pleasure to enjoy your poetry dear Vijay.. a win for me and in my fave list. My deepest regards and blessings. Merry Spring! Vijay Pandit April 26, 2019 at 11:08 AM I feel rewarded by your feedback..much appreciate Besma. Special thanks for the FAVE. Regards.

Darlene De Beaulieu April 11, 2019 at 11:31 AM Hello Vijay Pandit, you listed this poem as a verse, I read this poem as romance. I can feel the love in this poem. Have a nice day my friend. Vijay Pandit April 26, 2019 at 11:07 AM Much appreciate the kind feedback Darlene..many thanks.

Kyle Kriticos April 10, 2019 at 3:48 PM Love is such a beautiful thing Vjay and you bring it to life here on this page full of sincerity and vibrancy! Kudos to you my friend! Vijay Pandit April 26, 2019 at 11:06 AM Much appreciate Kyle..many thanks for the kind remarks.

Ravi Sathasivam April 10, 2019 at 6:39 AM Excellent. Sound very romantic. Happy ending my friend. Vijay Pandit April 26, 2019 at 11:05 AM Many thanks Ravi..much appreciate.

Winged Warrior April 9, 2019 at 9:12 AM I see you haven't lost your magical flare Vijay...excellent entry my friend...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*} Vijay Pandit April 26, 2019 at 11:05 AM Thank you WW..much appreciate.

Chuck Melugin April 8, 2019 at 6:05 AM VJ So original and So Smack Down Good! The last line pinned me for the full three count! The V.J. Crush is a lethal poetic move! Vijay Pandit April 26, 2019 at 11:04 AM Much appreciate Chuck..many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos April 6, 2019 at 3:18 PM I love the lines 'You must've heard the joy of cheers, For I see you smiling, shedding happy tears" How proud you must have felt! This poem is one of real and radiant love! - Good luck in the contest Vijay! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit April 6, 2019 at 4:01 PM Enjoyed reading your generous feedback Jennifer..much appreciate..many thanks.

Heidi Sands April 6, 2019 at 2:25 PM A beautifully written poem. Excellent 1st stanza! and I also love the line ...When message of hearts blew in prairies. I enjoyed this Vijay :) Vijay Pandit April 6, 2019 at 4:00 PM Much appreciate Heidi..so glad to read your feedback..many thanks as always.

Nette Onclaud April 6, 2019 at 12:47 PM looking forward to your next piece after your vacay, vijay!...huggs Vijay Pandit April 6, 2019 at 3:59 PM Thanks Nette..appreciate the visit and comments.

Swetha Vangaveti April 6, 2019 at 7:45 AM Love smiles like a cute baby in your poems.. well written :) Vijay Pandit April 6, 2019 at 3:58 PM Thank you Swetha..appreciate the kind feedback.

Charlie Smith April 5, 2019 at 9:35 AM Your joy shines Vijay, well done my friend... Vijay Pandit April 5, 2019 at 2:10 PM Much appreciate Charlie..many thanks.

Eve Roper April 5, 2019 at 9:19 AM Perfect romantic and written verse, Vijay. Good luck in the contest. Have a nice weekend. Hugs Eve ~`* Vijay Pandit April 5, 2019 at 2:09 PM Thank you Eve..much appreciate the kind words.

Supraja Kannan April 5, 2019 at 7:01 AM So beautiful, Vijay. Such a cute one. Reads like a winner . Vijay Pandit April 5, 2019 at 7:52 AM Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2019 at 4:21 AM - A poem that sings of love, Vijay :) - Beautifully written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit April 5, 2019 at 7:51 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate...many many thanks.

Paul Callus April 4, 2019 at 11:34 AM Definitely a big crush, Vijay! The start of a long romantic relationship. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit April 5, 2019 at 7:51 AM Much appreciate Paul..many thanks. Regards.

Lawrence Sharp April 4, 2019 at 10:46 AM The early magic of a new love expressed in the most radiant and evocative terms. Vijay Pandit April 5, 2019 at 7:50 AM You are so kind my friend..much appreciate..many thanks.

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