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When Message of Hearts Blew In Prairies

First time our eyes met, instantly I knew Why red rose-buds are boasting a bloom In fragrance of gardenia passing through As scent of pink lilies meant only for you Evoked conversation of romance for two. When message of hearts blew in prairies Words of desire carried a lyrical promise Blowing in the winds melody of our music Composing a song in harmony of dreams Wooing you to declare, for you I'm falling. I've heard about the allure you're feeling For you speak to me as I'm daydreaming Holding me captive, keeping me company, Praising your name every thought's saying It won't be long before you would own me. Unknowingly I introduced you to my family When in my sleep I spoke of you so fondly. You must've heard the joy of their cheers For I see you smiling, shedding happy tears-- As consent of your heart echoes in my ears. April 2, 2019 Placed 3rd: Strand choice O contest by Brian Strand I'm crushing on you poetry contest Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/13/2020 3:12:00 PM

Very romantic, Vijay :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 3/24/2020 5:21:00 PM

Vijay I have missed reading you! Congrats on your win!;)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/24/2020 2:30:00 PM

You just have such a wonderful ability to write romantic poetry! Congratulations, Vijay.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/24/2020 12:35:00 PM

Stellar write, Vijay:-) Congratulations on your win!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/9/2019 8:31:00 PM

Your words shine!! Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Judy Ball

Date: 5/5/2019 10:11:00 AM

Lovely Vijay. Who could resist such sweet sentiments. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/28/2019 6:03:00 AM

You captured the joy of new love. This is beautiful. I especially like, “Unknowingly I introduced you to my family When in my sleep I spoke of you so fondly.”. Bravo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/17/2019 11:50:00 PM

Yes, the wind knows many secrets. Moments of the heart. Congratulations Vijay. It is nice seeing this poem on the list of best poems. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:10:00 AM

Much appreciate your return visit Brandy...many thanks. Yes--it is nice to see it on the best poem chart.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/17/2019 4:03:00 PM

Beautiful words of love to one you hold dear. Very disarming. This would make a wonderful valentine. Love it. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:08:00 AM

Much appreciate the kind remarks Judy..many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/15/2019 4:54:00 AM

Your poem is magic! Having the enlivening scent and inspiring passion of spring! A sweet blossoming love in an exquisite poem! A great pleasure to enjoy your poetry dear Vijay.. a win for me and in my fave list. My deepest regards and blessings. Merry Spring!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:08:00 AM

I feel rewarded by your feedback..much appreciate Besma. Special thanks for the FAVE. Regards.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/11/2019 11:31:00 AM

Hello Vijay Pandit, you listed this poem as a verse, I read this poem as romance. I can feel the love in this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:07:00 AM

Much appreciate the kind feedback Darlene..many thanks.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 4/10/2019 3:48:00 PM

Love is such a beautiful thing Vjay and you bring it to life here on this page full of sincerity and vibrancy! Kudos to you my friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:06:00 AM

Much appreciate Kyle..many thanks for the kind remarks.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/10/2019 6:39:00 AM

Excellent. Sound very romantic. Happy ending my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:05:00 AM

Many thanks Ravi..much appreciate.

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/9/2019 9:12:00 AM

I see you haven't lost your magical flare Vijay...excellent entry my friend...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:05:00 AM

Thank you WW..much appreciate.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/8/2019 6:05:00 AM

VJ So original and So Smack Down Good! The last line pinned me for the full three count! The V.J. Crush is a lethal poetic move!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:04:00 AM

Much appreciate Chuck..many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/6/2019 3:18:00 PM

I love the lines 'You must've heard the joy of cheers, For I see you smiling, shedding happy tears" How proud you must have felt! This poem is one of real and radiant love! - Good luck in the contest Vijay! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2019 4:01:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your generous feedback Jennifer..much appreciate..many thanks.