Frederic Parker Poet Free verse

When Love was You

First posted 8/7/17


When memories hang like luminous fireflies
and days are another red thread on the horizon
when hope is no more than a wish held in the heart's reminder
    To what end do you haunt me so?
Is it a desire to once again feel my heart endlessly float
    from passion's yearning
caused by your kiss or the warmth of your hands
    as they held tight in conformation
Yes, I've kept your memory close
    a jeweled reflection
like a passing star leaving a fiery tail
   etched in the night sky
disappearing in the darkness like a silent wish
    and a sense of awe

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Silent One March 24, 2024 at 8:23 AM I love how your poem beautifully captures the lingering essence of memories and the bittersweet nostalgia they evoke. The opening imagery of memories hanging like luminous fireflies sets a whimsical and enchanting tone, drawing the reader into the speaker's introspection.

Ink Empress March 24, 2024 at 4:16 AM Dear frederick, this is just beyond evocative and soul stirring, i really love everything about this poem, one of my most fave poems iv read by you, but i keep saying this and you keep sharing even better. The imagery, emotions and depth of your lines hit so strong. And i also love how youv especially written “ Is it a desire to once again feel my heart” so touching and so well articulated.” Yes, I've kept your memory.. a jeweled reflection like a passing star leaving a fiery tail” wow! Fave

Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2024 at 12:53 PM - The light will always shine from wonderful old memories ... they have a part of your heart forever and always ... a feeling I know, Frederic - A beautiful poem, thank you very much :) - I wish you a lovely Easter :) - hugs