When Love Sour Soon

When love sour soon,

 The earth seems pause 

 Friends become stranger

The sky looks limited

Opportunity become scarce

The stars seems far flung

Lover become foe

When all the dew drops gathers

in the ocean

My tear drops will pour as rain

My pain will no more be a trial

But a golden crown

Even if the love sour soon

Still my love would remain unadulterated.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rose  Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 3:28 PM
When love is true it remains loyal, nicely penned
Phom Sudhir Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 3:32 PM
I agree. Thank you so much!
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