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when love is innocent

When Love Was Innocent What is this feeling I feel is this real Does your stomach flutter when we touch? Tell me if we are connecting or if it’s too much Twinkles in our eyes feelings of butterfly’s What is this feeling I feel? When one completes me and I feel whole Do you feel the same does your feet get cold? A breath of fresh air a feeling you care We become one when we do the long stares My heart my soul a change in my glow You complete me and I like when it shows Playing in my hair like when the wind blows Is this love so innocent and sweet? Kiara Jacobs 05/07/15

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Date: 5/9/2015 2:43:00 AM
Hi Kiara.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give any of the varied contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes this month! Please take time to check me out, ok... PS.. If you have any questions about the Soup feel free to ask, just send me a Soup Mail. Talk soon!
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:01:00 PM
Kiara, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/7/2015 3:39:00 PM
Beautiful poem! I love it! Btw, Welcome to poetry soup! I can't wait to read more of your work! :) <3 Tash
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Date: 5/7/2015 2:05:00 PM
I love the message, it's never good to keep it in to long. Kiara, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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