Contest-Wilderness of Want- sponsor Ink Empress- 9/21/26
As I wake within the rose of wilderness my eyes are aroused by twilight's soft glow surrounding your face in a wondrous shroud of glimmering illumination leaving me breathless giving rise to the heart beat you hear in this evening of silent raptured luminosity Where you and I beseech the sun to undress the stars that quietly appear, as the sunset bows to the night in a red splayed sky filling the horizon opening the night's stage of enchantment inviting romantic scenes that we'll play in a pulsating atmosphere filled with heavenly flickering gleams that wash across the black sky to shine on the vivid colored blossoms of our soul dancing with a shimmering magical intimacy from a soft breeze of tranquility binding our senses to the aroma covering the luster of our enraptured heart as we transformed into lovers lost on an island of fragrant perfume and passion surrendering ourselves to be prisoners where we were tortured by the taste of touch that purified us on the altar of love's breathless embrace
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