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When Love Arrived

WHEN LOVE ARRIVED Where were you when love arrived When I admired you from far away Deep within me my heart strived To find the words to say I would steal furtive glances With my heart frenetically pounding Wondering what were my chances Without being so confounding The dawning of that wonderful day Seemed always to elude me And so I went on my sorrowful way But thoughts of you pursued me What glory filled my beating heart I found out you loved me from the start 15 January 2018 For contest sponsored by Rob Carmack

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Date: 5/11/2018 7:44:00 AM
Yay! Fabulous to see this piece getting the love! Congratulations! :) xomo!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 5/11/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you, Mo! Good to hear from you and receive such high praise on my entry. I appreciate it. Be Blessed, my friend!
Date: 5/10/2018 11:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Curtis. Well done.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 5/11/2018 10:15:00 AM
Thanks, Line. I hoped it would place --- and it did!
Date: 1/24/2018 11:20:00 PM
what a sweet write, Curtis.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/25/2018 1:40:00 AM
Thanks, Rhoda. It wasn't difficult to write this one.
Date: 1/16/2018 9:17:00 PM
I love the rhythm in this piece, beautiful pen Curtis, my best to you in the contest xomo
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/17/2018 2:49:00 AM
Thanks, Mo! I needed that! Your support is so appreciated.

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