Hugo Sarvida Jr. Poet Free verse

When Loneliness Strikes In

When longing strike in
You have no voice that comes out
Just passing through the wind
I entrust it the way it is
Finally the rain accompanied
By a bit of wind that add the chilling
Which makes my longing more intense
In progression with silence too long.

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 27, 2025 at 3:41 PM Hello Hugo, yes when the loneness begins a feeling that last like it is forever. this feels horrible and pulls the mood down. A person can be in a room with people. Yet still feel lonely. Much love here. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu January 28, 2025 at 11:26 AM It is not a nice feeling. That person feels oh, now i am a widow, I am not able to speak to a man if I want to. So more loneness is felt. Much love here. ./Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu January 28, 2025 at 11:18 AM Hello Hugo, Loneness seems to stick around for a very long time. Making a person feel sad and depressed. Yes in a crowd loneness is felt. A person feels empty and lonely. For a widow if she is talking to a male she see doing the lawn, the wief comes out and says stay away from my husband. Hugo Sarvida Jr. January 27, 2025 at 8:24 PM Loneliness really is sickening. It's like a vacuum space that something need to be filled in. Though you're in a crowd, still feels empty and lonely. The heart is truly a caregiving thing that need care, comfort and repair. Thank you, Darlene for your nice assessment. I love you even more./Hugo.