When Lilacs Bloom

Mushrooms peak b'neath
the moon, and rabbits charm'd by grass

do swoon. Where tulip's petals once
so strong, unite the fall'n, one

last song. Once again the goslings
wander, stray not
 far from

nipping mother.
 The winds will

howl in sheets of rain,
 grandma snug,
wrapped

in her shawl.
 Aside the fire, pen
will bend,

 this poem

 on         birchbark,


  ...peace

 the end.



05/26/13
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Watkins Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 11:24 PM
Very lyrical and beautifully written, but I was a bit confused by the line breaks. - Gary
That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 8:27 AM
I really enjoyed this piece, Jimbo. You have a cool and unique style and a masterful way with words; kudos! :)
Loveless Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Its a beautiful poem and my eyes can see it all. I hope she finds her rocking chair comfortable, and the fire not too warm.
Gabriella Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 2:12 AM
Amusing poem indeed! Great job!
Richards Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 2:19 PM
There is a warm sense of whimsy and charm with this one! Loved it, James !!
Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:40 AM
Excellent creation that you have penned..Thoroughly enjoyed reading this one..Sara
Neels Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Hey James, havent been on the Soup for a while; so it's a joy to read this enchanting write of yours ;) tc Wilma
Horn Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations on being in the top 100. My only 30 have a long way to go. How do you do it? [email protected]
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 3:21 PM
a very interesting one from you. It's so enchanting!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Dear James, thank you for visiting! Why on earth you want to trade the paradise you live with the hell of the city? Ha-ha! Certainly you have your valid reasons! I lived in Montreal, Canada, for about twenty years and understand the beauty of nature as you describe it in your beautiful poem and your gracious comment! God bless you my friend, I hope you will still be around!
Onclaud Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 8:51 AM
You slay me with your incredible words and poetic mood, jimo.. nice to be back and see how you've come a long way.. greeat stuff!..:) huggs
Chircop Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 3:31 PM
Its a magical poem ..You created a cosy and beautiful picture in my mind-lovely as always.
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